Loved this. Tony’s mind is a crazy thing.

loved it

This story is so cool, so sweet! Loved it :)

So sweet.

great story!

oh excellent really and i hope it was in real thruth!

I love it really

update sil vous plait! please! por favor!

"Come get it gorgeous" ha ha that was the best line!

*giggle*...That was wonderful. I love the quirky snark and deliciously fast and witty 'ping-ping-ping' of his mental thought processes. I adored his snarky thought responses, especially to Rhodey. Bahahaha!

"Rhodey. Get screwed." -possibly the single most amusing sentence I have ever read in an Iron Man fic. xD Because you can so see it on his face when he looks over at Rhodes in annoyance. Beautiful, haha.

Aww, thanks for posting this, I saw the movie and this was (OF COURSE) one of my favorite parts. Good job!

Best Movie Ever!

Totally didn't see the kiss comming either. I actually thought they were going to go with Pepper/Happy. It seemed they were going that way. Happy had a bigger role, Pepper and Happy had more one on one time too. Maybe it was just me or maybe they were trying to surprise us with the end. IDK, but anyways, I loved the ending in the movie and i love yuor interpretation of it.

Good Job.

~Jess

Awwh, yes, yes, YES! :D It was so painful, not reading this until the movie came to the US...I saw it opening day, though, dunno why it took me this long to review. BUT. XD Nice work catching the lines! And *beautiful* story, Tony's thoughts were perfect! (: Keep on writing!

-Person

God, i just finished watching the movie today, and i hafta say you're so good at captivating tony's character! I love it, he's narcissistic and funny (the things that make tony starks tony starks)! Fantastic job.

oh my god that is so SWEET! You should totally write a book, you are THAT talented! Well done, I think you captured the heart of that scene so well!

Was it you I mentioned the dog to or someone else? Sorry, just curious

this was kinda hard to read in the beginning & the middle because the dialogue is disjointed, they're not speaking in complete sentences. i also had a hard time differenting between the actual movie lines & your added "thought speaking". it would be better if yours in italic so you see the difference. it got better at the kiss because it seemed then you were describing the movie & there was no dialogue. from there it got better. ALSO- i'm guessing your in the U.K. (hi from US), but HOW did the UK get IM2 released to the public before we get it May 7th? I know the world premiere was suppose to happen in London (don't get that either), but how is it released early in England?