So damn good I didn't know I had this type of kink I would pay for the author to finish the story Ha...

I'm wigging in my seat just from reading the ending of the chapter!

and very creative on the warning if no one has mentioned to you, but i really did read it in a pirate accent...like the one who opens the show for Sponge Bob :3

Haha! The way this is going Zoro is never going to tame the sexy deadly beast known as Sanji! Love these type of stories! Master and slave!

'Number Sixteen'? Wasn't it 'Number Nineteen' in chapter 1? So distracting...

Im slowly rediscovering all of your story and this one is one of my favorite! I like the fact that Sanji isn't accepting the "lover" thing with Zoro because I think this is a normal reaction when you are almost obligated to have sex with someone that you don't really like. I even think that he should have maybe more shame; Does everyone(Ussop,Nami) knows about their "contract"?
I really hope that you will continue this incredible story:D
Continue like this with your awesome imagination !

¡No puedo creerlo! Si antes el capitulo uno y dos estaban muy buenos, ¡con esta edición se ven geniales! ¡Dios! Se nota el cambio que diste y la verdad haz mejorado tu narración, cambiastes muchas cosas, como por ejemplo la escena del baño, recuerdo que Sanji se avergonzaba por la ropa que Usopp le había dado, y ahora no está o quiero creer que quizás esté en otro capitulo.

También cambiaste el modo de su captura y sobre todo me gustó que plasmaras el aire de autosacrificio que Sanji tiene (me encanta el cocinero) y que diga que lo hace por las damas aunque en verdad se preocupe por todos sin importar que hubiecen hombres.

En verdad, es bueno qur estés de vuelta, a pesar que fuera este año que comencé a leer fics en inglés.

El problema es, que a pesar de que estas editando, nadie se dará cuenta hasta que actualices de que ya volviste, porque fanfiction no lo notifica. ¿Cómo me di cuenta? Porque ya habías avisado que editarias y como hoy revisé tu perfil, enseguida vine a leerte.

Espero que no te moleste que te deje reviews en español, y si te molesta avisame, aunque soy malisima escribiendo inglés, más no leyendolo (tengo un problema de no saber el orden de como deben escribirse las palabras).

Ahora ando feliz de que el capitulo fuera relativamente mas largo, se te agradece.

Please please update! Not enjoyed a story so much in a while!

Oh wow, this story is amazing!

BMS

This story is really good ! At first, I wasn't really convinced because it seemed odd. I'm talking about the feelings between them, a little confusing " But soon after, my interest grow up and I was really curious how this story could continued. In fact, I think those chapter were about Sanji and Zoro and as the chapter six finish, we have that impression that the story could finish, well, just like that. As if Sanji will remain a slave and Arabasta will solve its problem by itself. It miss all the background about the resolution of the town's problem and (of course XD) the future progression of the relation... what a pity T_T I hope you'll update this story again, don't give up )

awesome ! i love this story its amazing update soon please

It's a great story. Very well written, with few
mistakes. I don't see many master-slave stories, so it always makes me happy when I find one that has been done right.

The dynamic started out just right between the two characters. A great amount of tension, and reluctance on Sanji's part, not to mention pride, which is exactly how I would imagine his reaction to be. However, (I know- there's always a "however," I hate it too) reading through chapter six, their relationship has not progressed much. And since the relationship is the main plot/conflict, it's important that we see some movement in one direction with it. (Of course I also see the plot with the rebellion and all that, but it doesn't hold my attention because it's a reiteration of what we've seen in the anime. We all know Luffy rides in and kicks Crocodile's butt, only it will be a little different, most likely, becaus it's Luffy's crew minus Sanji, Zoro, Usopp, and Nami. -where is Luffy by the way? Will he be introduced later?)

But I enjoyed the story as a whole, and I think it's time for some progression. And I know, this progression is going to be a real bitch to get out, because of Sanji's major trust issues, and his reluctance. The ideal way to keep moving now is slowly, to get Zoro in the game. Maybe let Sanji see Zoro's humanity? It's your decision on where you want to take it.

I think staying in Sanji's POV may prove to be more difficult than Zoro's though. When you write from Sanji's POV, you tend to like to side with him, and there's no way someone with Sanji's feelings would want to further the "ZoSan," if you will. Now if you look at it from Zoro's POV, you see him as this guy conflicted between lust and guilt, which may be easier to write in if you want a straight path to the consensual relationship.

But then again, you have proven to be more than capable of making choices on the path of the fic, and executing them with expertise. So do what you please, and by all means, continue!

this is an amazing story. it seems like it could be made into a book with the way that it is written. i love the detail and the issues that have to be resolved. it is really great and cant wait to read more!

LA

Im loving this story so far and i cant wait to read more of it and see what emotions sanji will go through plz update soon

So.. Sanji is naked... slave... naked, Ok, i like how you think.

Thank you for the chapter! Awesome (and core-strucking) chapter as always.
Hope this story is the one that gets picked up by your muse. :)