I really hope you find time to finish this great story.

Thank You, Oldgamer45

I wanted to let you know, I very much enjoyed your take on Altair. The horrific way he was trained, by being beat,and sexually assaulted. Made to submit, to the Grand Master, the man he had come to think of as a father figure. Being sent on missions, most wouldn’t live through, only to be told , he didn’t do it well enough. His failure at Solomon's temple, Maliks obtaining the treasure, and loosing his arm and his brother Kadar’s death. His being stripped of his master rank, and told he could redeem his self with the killing of 9 men for the Master. This task ended up being his salvation, as he learned from the men he killed , of his Masters treachery. His changing and growing with the knowledge learned. His reconciliation, with Malik. And his redemption, killing his Master, who was the traitor, of the brotherhood. He became Master, and made Malik his second. Together, they would rebuild the order, that would continue through the centuries.
Altair, to me, was the greatest assassin. He did it all with stealth, blades and skill.
Thank you for a great story. They are my escape. Oldgamer45

I love this story so much and have reread it 4 times. Hope all is well!

AAAAUUUUUGGGH! NOOOOO! MORE PLEASE! GODS MORE! COME BACK AND KEEP WRITING THIS AWESOME AND DEVOURABLE FANFIC! *begs and pleads*

Well in my opinion and experience of reading (asides the normal typos) this is indeed a story well worthy of many many more updates and of course you are entitled to be HUMAN when being criticized or crucified because your story (which mind you is one of the longest I have come across thus far in fanfic) is not historically accurate. IT IS NOT HISTORY! jeez. e_e it is fan fiction, not cannon, and as such, you have every right to let your imagination go absolutely WILD and crazy! So far, nothing, and I mean nothing you have written has taken away from how delightfully distracting and engaging your story has been for me. Chapter upon chapter, hour upon hour, and I still cannot get enough. I see that theres not been an update in a long while and pray (beg A LOT) for you to return to this absolutely marvelous (and not historically accurate * eye roll * ) fan fic you have created.

TLDR: I LOVE IT! COME BAAAAAAAAACCCCCCKKKK! PLZ FEED THE ADDICTION YOU'VE CREATED! :P

Okay, you've totally got me hooked. Your story, writing style, and brilliant comments to reviews are fantastic. This is so well thought out and done. Oh my, please, please, please, please continue this brilliant story! I see we're at 257 chapters and still going. Gods, please continue.

Altaïr was reading the Gospel of Thomas.

This story is super good, I am sad to see that you never finished it. I know it has been a few years but I hope that you will return to complete this story. Youbare an amazing writer!

wonder why it's forbidden. *sarcasm sarcasm*

Oh my...! I liked this chapter very very much. As I see, your story is a long one. And I love long fanfictions that keep me focused on them for months .

You know what I'm sure anyone who reads that can fix the link, all it's missing is the DOTnet between fanfiction and s
And it needs the spaces removed, of course.

www . fanfiction s / 10092682/101/Unintended-Consequences

I've been reading this story at the same time as this one: s/10092682/101/Unintended-Consequences
(No idea what chapter that link is for)
And mentally I've just been like; 'Wow, now what if Hard Secrets Malik sudden had to deal with Unintended Consequences Altair suddenly appearing in a flash of gold light and being like; 'Welp, I guess this is an alternate dimension,' Like it's the most normal thing in the world, and then having to explain everything that's been happening in UC starting with what has yet to happen in HS like Al Maulim being reveled as a traitor. And Malik just freaking the fuck out because he thought his life and his version of Altair was complicated and it just has nothing on this mess.
I also keep remembering that Unintended Consequences supposedly started as a oneshot and just laughing my ass off.

Hi! .I am eagerly but slowly reading this story. I enjoy being a slow reader as it's the way I can appreciate the story most. I know you wrote this some years ago but it doesn't matter. Some day you'll see my message. I liked this chapter a lot, I will go on reading this!

This story is absolutely stunning, your writing style is amazing and I would love it if you were to continue it.