aaawww this story is so different i like it & can't wait to read more

You've got something going here but why you switched Tony into Toby, I'll never know. At least this isn't a Yaio. I hate those, and DN Angel is plagued with those. You've got a great story so far and I can imagine it in my head while i read

This story sounds interesting.

By the way you didn't need to make the second chapter separate. If you go to the Stories section of your profile under this story you can add chapters.