| Reviews for The Last Breath |
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frostedglaze chapter 30 . 4/12 Well this made me cry. Great ending, since I cheated and read the companion piece to this...but why did Varner get away with kidnapping a child? I still want him to face the consequences, he got off scot free, the beast. |
frostedglaze chapter 29 . 4/12 Um, no. Jasper is alive somehow. |
frostedglaze chapter 25 . 4/12 Varner is a monster, he doesn’t deserve the title of doctor. He denied Bella her child not once, but twice. That bastard needs to go to jail, or better yet die, slowly, and painfully. |
Dawn63 chapter 30 . 4/15/2019 Loved reading your story. Definitely one of my favorites. I'm hoping Jasper's not really dead and that somehow he will be able to make it out alive. Going to read The Long Way Home to find out. Your writing is so authentic for the time period. Great job! |
sersmom chapter 2 . 1/30/2019 I’ve read this before but this time I went ahead and read Lavender Mornings. I love the way you have taken a “what if” direction for Miss Edi and her David. |
Nlresda123 chapter 31 . 12/2/2018 Amazing story. Going straight to my favourites list. Wow. Your writing ability is fantastic |
LAB1 chapter 31 . 5/13/2018 I've loved your story, but I still feel in my heart that Jasper is alive. Just like Bella and Edward were reported dead and they weren't, Jasper has been badly burned and scared, but he does come back to see his namesake! And of course Alice! |
Ameliah Cullen chapter 2 . 9/8/2016 Wow ! Brilliant. I love looking into Edwards Mind and as I've said you have portrayed it perfectly! |
Ameliah Cullen chapter 1 . 9/8/2016 I really love the way you speak from Edwards mind. Its just brilliant. I've only read the first chapter and I already want to know what's going to happen next! Keep up the Good work |
magmom4 chapter 30 . 3/25/2016 I have read this for the second time. It is a great story. I was born in 1943 so you can see the interest. I do seem to remember there was more. Could you let6 me know if there is. |
Lmx3108 chapter 30 . 1/10/2016 What a wonderful story this was. So well-written, well-researched, and just so enjoyable. Thank you! |
jetteblack chapter 30 . 11/24/2015 oh gosh- ilove this story and Jaspers one, i read them in my early fanfic days before i started favouriting and i had to do the big search, so glad i had a second chance to reread, awesome :) thanks |
Sunshine1220 chapter 30 . 11/6/2015 Loved, loved, loved this story. Can't wait to read your other tales! |
PAT2024 chapter 31 . 9/29/2015 Waou !.. I loved this beautiful story. It's so well written. Thank you for so much emotions and historical details. You've done a great job. I really wonder why your story is not more reviewed, favoured... It's one of the best stories I ever read on this site. I'm so happy I found it. The love of Edward for Bella and Serena is so beautiful, the plot, the atmosphere, everything was there. I would have liked a few BPOVs may be... I cried so much during the last chapter... I am eager to read Jasper's story, right now, I hope he will find his Alice and have an HEA... Thank you for sharing. |
Guest chapter 18 . 9/9/2015 I'm going to see the Queen Maey in Long beach with new eyes the next time I head down there. We usually go for the Scottish faire in the spring. Reb |