Jacob's a bit homophobic in this chapter.

Wow. You didn't really do your research at all.

1) Werewolves CAN'T be turned.

2) As with 1, Jake getting bit by a half dozen vamps would kill him. Vamp venom is an excrutiating poison that kills werewolves.

3) Imprinting is at first sight. So Jake would have imprinted on Alice in Bella's house, not in the Volturi dungeons.

Anyway, I tried to read your story, but between these errors and the grammar/spelling issues, I just can't continue.

I'm so confused. I thought Jared imprinted on Bree

I'm sorry but is Jacob a Wolf or a little Bitch. Why the fudge is he blushing so much? Good story though

That was so awesome i was wondering if you were gonna make a sequel to this where jacob becomes a hybrid for alice?

I like this idea.

But I absolutely hate first person POV.

I am left feeling highly conflicted.

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Fuckin' stupid ending! Waste of fuckin' time!

I thought th this story was beautiful & sweet, it showed the strength of the love between these two, even the end where their love for eachother was put the test. I won't lie it did break my heart but it showed that Jacob knew what he didn't want & that was to not become a vampire. So all in all great story.

Know what, now I think about it is pretty good for the ending

He ran. U can't leave it like that, come on man don't do this to me ;'(

What the hell?! How could it end there? Love the story though

. . . . . I loved the story. I HATE you. Poorest ending ever. I shall never read your stories again.

this is good keep it going

THANK YOU! I DESPISE Jasper so thank you for making me hate him more but can you please have Jacob kick the crap out of him?