Wow... simply amazing. It actually made me tear up a little and that rarely happens. Beautifully written, bravo!

I loved how each person had their own little chapter thing. Very good! :)

I truly like how you did this story-very impressive, indeed!

I've always loved when people gave depth to the Largos. It's wonderful when it turns out.

What I loved most about your story is how they thought of each other and their father, and what their father never realized is that all the little changes in his children that he thought so unworthy, that he found distasteful and embarassing, he'd caused by never showing them what they needed. They gave up on him and were blamed for it and punished by way of further distance. I really love this fic. Very nice job!

i love how you write about the largos.

this is an amazing fic.

I love all of these chapters, but I think you should put them all as one chapter with breaks in it. It would make a much more completed picture, I think. But that's just me obviously :]

~Miki

I absoutley loved this :D It was captured quite nicely, I loved each more and more as I read, thanks for writing this :D

wow i really like how you got into each characters head and made the largo family appear to be just that: a family. a twisted and dysfunctional family, but a family nonetheless. well done