i loved this paul and bella...that whole hate, love thing ;)

very good !

uuuhh I like it !

The boys may complain about being called beautiful in wolf form but hey, at least she didn't call them pretty, pretty puppies? ;D

Just wanted to say that I truly enjoyed this story! It took be hardly no time from start to finish!

I'm sure I will read more of your work! I just wanted to let you know!

Could do with some editing. But it's a good start.

O boy something wicked comes this way... I hope it can be fixed soon...

Wow that was scary and interesting bella is very trusting and have no idea that something could be very wrong... Hmmm it seems like a storm is coming...

What is really going on with the Cullen's first Edward now alice ? Hmm the wolves have enough on their plate without the Cullen kids in the mix... I hopejake can find bella safe and he can deal with Leah...

Awww Paul has anger issues and bella isn't helping by pushing those whoo I hope they can move on now and that Edward is not out to get her this could end very badly...

Whoa someone got some explaining to do...

Wow now both bella and Jake have their answer I wonder what they will do next... Wow bella is awesome angry and a stubborn but to crack go luck Paul Leah isn't to far behind good luck Jake...

Wow what a time to announce yourself... Hmmm where is the water hose lol..

Wow that was a great show... poor bella she is funny angry and just plain confused...

Wow why did the boys had to push so hard?hmmm it now seems all they had do was taut bella...nice first chapter its is very intense... Paul is having so many issues one minute he want scare bella to death then be caring the next what is his deal?