I sorta wish that Percy was one of the ones that could stand up to Annabeth instead of being always afraid of her glare because in everything I read they always make the guys the weak ones but otherwise I like your story.

I really like your story but I wished that you didn't include the part about what if Annabeth was an illegal alien because what's wrong with them? And it could offend people otherwise though I like this story.

I like your writing!

omg. this is the best story i'd read in
maybe u should continue writing. im sure you'd come up with some interesting ideas!
;) ;D

Legit such a good story, really know how to get in the feels .

Dear writer,

It is a wonderful piece you have created! I have even read it twice now. Though why Rachel as the 'big fight'
. It would be more interesting if he was keeping a MAJOR secret.

Keep up that awesomeness, AK

My heart is blowing up

I APOLOGIZE. I REALLY DO. Ghostgirl19 IS NOT THE CULPRIT OF PLAGIARISM. the user WHO IS GUILTY OF PLAGIARISM is Ashleigh1002. GHOSTGIRL IS AN INCREDIBLE AUTHOR AND I RECOMMEND CHECKING HER WORK IF YOU LOVE MIRACULOUS LADYBUG. THAT IS ALL.

Sorry if my info has several spelling and grammatical errors btw! I wrote the comments very last at night while on low energy 0.0 Take care!

Hi. I wanted to say that I’m not quite a fan of the Percy Jackson series as I just have not read the series however, I think your story is beautifully well-written. Unfortunately, I wish I could say that I know that because I read your amazing story up to the thirteenth chapter, but that would be a lie. My current favorite fandom has to be “Miraculous Tales of Ladybug and Chat Noir,” and being the fan I am, I wanted even more out of the show so I checked out some stories on fanfic. Somewhere on social media however, there was a post that informed people to check out a fanfic for the series called “Artificial Engagement.” Being the romantic sap I am I wanted to check out the story so I did and fell in love with it. Only towards the end did I check the comment section to find that the author who goes by the name of “ghostgirl19” did I find that her great story writing and desire to write outside of the norms regarding the main characters, Adrien and Marinette, was plagiarized. As I enjoy writing and treasure every story, I felt angry and tricked and I can’t imagine how you would feel about another person taking credit for your work to just get a few reviews only. I left a very detailed message with ghostgirk19 so that she can realize and come to terms with issues that can arise from plagiarism. Here’s the comment that you could use for evidence:
“PLEASE READ. I really am disappointed and disgusted with people like you. I was enjoying and making time to enjoy this story about one of my favorite fandoms of all time during my short breaks from long and arduous schoolwork. Now I feel dirty for reading this story so far. This story is really good and very-well written, but that’s exactly the problem. I found it odd though how different the personalities of each character were. Here’s some EVIDENCE: Marinette and Adrien have some of the best manners and don’t seem to have a bad bone in their bodies which is the complete opposite in the story. Gabriel in the show is stoic and serious meanwhile he is uncharacteristically immature and careless. The setting of the story is in Manhattan rather than Paris which is the setting for Miraculous Ladybug. Also, Chloe was made Adrien’s cousin? Chloe in the show is Adrien’s childhood friend and a girl that has a crush on him to which Adrien finds annoying. And where did MIKE come from? Had you been more precise you may have used Natalie, Gabriel’s assistant’s name instead or maybe the Gorilla or someone that somehow relates to the show. For the original author who ACTUALLY wrote the story the “Mike” represents Mark Cahale. SECOND PIECE OF EVIDENCE: THE TITLE AND EACH CHAPTER ALONG WITH DIALOGUE AND USE OF WORDING ARE EXACTLY THE SAME. EXACTLY. Nothing has been changed whatsoever. I love Miraculous Ladybug a lot too, but this is not the correct way to express your love for the show. However, I guess I should thank you for showing me a very good story that I might come back to on THE ORIGINAL ACCOUNT should I get into the ‘Percy Jackson and the Olympians’ fan base. If you anyone likes Percy Jackson and wants a good read then go ahead and check out the author “Akatsuki Child” as he/she seems incredibly talented. However, you ought to be ashamed of yourself. I’m warning you now that your “clever” idea to take a beautiful story and attempt to take credit over it is a prime example of plagiarism and because of it you will lose credibility as an author. Have a good life and maybe just think smarter next time yes?
-BlueSailorCat14”
Even though we’re two different fanbases, nobody should have to deal with their being plagiarized when fanfiction stories are based the idea that our love for our fandoms can grow even more. I hope this helps and I am so sorry that this incident happened to you.
-BlueSailorCat14

dude someone has copied your work under the same name in the miraculous ladybug fandom. and it just sucks because you don't deserve to put all this work into this fic and then have someone come along and take it.

So I'm not sure if you're aware but someone is taking this story, changed the names, and is posting it in the Miraculous Ladybug fandom. They didn't even change the name of the story.

I just love your stories dude!

You just couldn’t stop could you?
Alright fine, forced to be married I can deal with that.
Forced to live with each other, alright I guess
Being kidnapped to a private island because this FORCED marriage wasn’t progressing fast enough? Good lord, I don’t know how anyone could kill their story fast enough. I don’t want to even go into the nuances of the characters, like how Poseidon is the fuck up, forces this shit on Percy and Annabeth, and still decides to run their lives for him. Or the fact that Percy is undeniably cowardly with everything that involves himself and Annabeth, or the fact that Annabeth just seems like a bipolar person have the time. I’m sorry but there has to be a stopping point somewhere

You know you fucked it up bad.

Poseidon: Don't you think that you have given him too much control. After fucking up so bad in a poker game he should have stayed away from his child's life, that's what people do.

Percy: Do I even need to start. He is wimpy, unoriginal and most of all allows too much control to his father. Children don't give that many chances to their parents and if you meddle too much in your child's life, then all you are going to get at the end of the day is a middle finger. And why the hell he is the one to make mistakes all the time. I think you don't like Percy.

Annabeth: Seriously, she is so mature but can't see past her nose. Why the world has to revolve around her. And don't you think its getting pretty repetitive with boys shivering in fear before her whenever she is angry.