I was expecting...more, or something.

A short but good read.

And sad too...

If you ever want to, maybe a story about how the Flood happened on Earth, and how that ship crashed? And what happened to the Master Chief before the story. Could be a very interesting story...

Oh gods... I can't stop the tears...

Commendable. Interesting. I'm tempted to implore you to reconsider your stance on this story's status as a one-shot...

Everything about this was so perfectly woven together- it's just amazing. The situation is well laid-out, the ending was thought-provoking, the writing was so interesting... Brilliant job.

Wow! This was amazing! The dark tone of the story was vividly portrayed. Truly one of the best Halo fanfics that I have every read. Great job.

Wow, that was intense. What an ending. Cool.

In the name of all things holy, this was a great story! Very well executed and I spotted no GPS errors. Truly, this was very well done and *click* is now on my fav list.