Awwwww! Loved it, very sweet :D

Omg! I love this fanfic! I didn't know you liked Mass Effect as well! (It's xcubiczirconia, I just changed my sn xD)

Hha I just have to say I was watching the Addams family family values and it was the scene where fester and Debbie get encased in the grace yard and it was scary how the dialog in the movie match the ending there just funny

Anyway love the story

This was so sweet! And I don't understand why something like this couldn't have been in the game. Maybe not the nudity, but some of the dialogue and touching. Very good.

Beautiful and gentle. Great job :D

A nicely written story. And your inclusion of the ingame speech was a nice touch!

I really liked this! It's a lot different than the other 'before omega relay' fanfics I've read :) It's more emotional...great job!

This was so sweet. I loved how Shepard sought out Mordin for lotion, and ended up with some good advice. Also like the referral to Decimus Arkas, and how you didn't dwell on it to much. The actual sex scene was well written, and the aftermath? Absolutely perfect, and totally in character for both. I know it's hard to say that, seeing as every Shepard is a mix of Bioware's options and what the player thinks their Shepard should be, but it's true.