So, right now I have read about one third of this story. I must say I am thoroughly impressed; this is a completely unique take on Harry's personality. There's a lot of internal musings and much philosophy going on, which is not really characteristic for Harry Potter fanfiction.
An interesting idea is the personification of Harry's magic, Magie that, I'm sure, will continue to play a big part as the story develops.

One point of constructive criticism, if I may. You seem to have a hard time with the definite article 'the' and you omit it quite frequently where it should have been used, several times per chapter, in fact. It doesn't lessen the readability too much, but it's definitely something you might want to consider for your upcoming writing projects.

This definitely goes into my favourites and I will be checking back for updates. Good job. The amount of work you have put into it so far was very well worth it.

I loved how unique Harry was as a character in this story, he was unlike any other fictional character I've ever read about before. However, this story felt like it was missing "something" that would have elevated this from a good story, to an amazing story... if only I could pinpoint what that something was. The best I can think of is the fact that this story was completely driven and focused on Harry, to the point that most of the other characters felt more like literary tools for Harry to make use of, rather than actual people in their own right.

I wonder if Neville goes thinking. "This could be the cure for my parents!"

I really like the way you set this story up, but I had to stop reading several chapters in. The grammatical and spelling errors were taking me out of the story too often. I'm glad other people are able to push past those and read it, though.

Truly an interesting premise you have. I wonder how things play out with his little cadre.

This is absolute Beauty. Amazing Writing style. The work of art. I can't describe how beautifully you wrote this fanfiction.

This story was so beautiful. I wish I wrote it. Well done.

Personally I think that anybody who objects to killing people who commit murders and arson and more are idiots, and "stooping to their level" is and always has been a weak-ass argument when war exists and soldiers kill people all the time. They're not evil or crazy, they just kill the people who threaten innocent people. It's not a big deal and not something to be abhorred.

If any thing you underdid things to Rita. Considering what an awful person she is, blackmailing her into his personal reporter or exposing her to the world and letting them take care of her would be more than fair.

I found your story from a recommendation in a Facebook page. I have enjoyed this wonderful story greatly. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

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Wow, what an interesting story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Two nitpicks: you spelled "warm" as "worm" once, where Draco was complaining about Hogsmeade, but more importantly during the discussion of Slitherin politics, you spelled "clock" as "cock", which has, er, a completely different meaning.

never had I read such story which got me thinking about life, nature and human psychology on this site. nice writing there.

thank you, this story helped me break out of a depressive episode. you're very talented and I appreciate your literature.