Other than raptor being a fast fumbling fool durung the big fight and casting no spells, and not call for gryff sword immediately, or acting in rage with Hannah stabbed, it was a confusing battle scene.

I am sure it will work out in the end, but this was perhaps the only likeable Pansy in fan fic history

This is a prime example of what I truly hate to run across - a great story that draws me in, grabs my attention and won't let go. Sucks me down the road, chapter after chapter, only for me to began to suspect that it is not truly finished when it says complete on the blurb. Then I get to the final chapter only to find - End of Part 1. When I check, it's been nearly five years since it was posted. ARGH!

I truly do appreciate the time and effort you put into this tale, it is a great tale, one I totally enjoyed but the problem for me is it is NOT finished. Your muse died or you lost interest, or something else came up. I know not, and I know that you owe me squat. You didn't do it for me, I'm simply one of the lucky souls that ran across your tale and read it, what there is of it.

So all I can do is hope that some day, some how, you will the inspiration to write the second part and bring this brilliant tale to a TRUE end.

Thank you for what you have shared with us. Now please pardon me while I go bang my head on the wall having once again found a half complete tale that I truly loved.

Fast pace, HARD core Harry, what isn't there to like about this story? Nothing I can find. I hope you have him rip them all a new one, including opening the eyes of the goodie two shoes of the X-Men. You do NOT leave an enemy behind. When you've got someone that is a proven serial killer, who enjoys killing, you put him down like the rabid dog that he is. End of story. That said in RL I do not condone the use of the death penalty unless you have 100% hard core proof that the person you are condemning to death is the killer. Too many people have been taken from death row after it was proven that they were not the killers.
That said in this tale there is no doubt who the killers are nor is there any doubt of their guilt. I have no problem with them being killed. They have earned death as they are not fit to live.

just re-read
even better. thanks

I did enjoy you story very much; thank you for finishing your work and thank you for sharing your talent.

They need to send an envoy to the ICW to tell them to get magical brittan under control fast because this news paper is being shared with every non-human magical and mutant alike, the British Ministry of Magic has officially declared war on Mutant Kind. Should also send it to the Queen and Prime Minister telling them to get control of the Magical Ministry before open warfare is all over their streets.

With the Ministry now capturing non-magical mutants and imprisoning them, they have started a war with mutant kind. With the magical mutants help the ministry won't stand a chance, especially when they bring it to the ICW and proclaim that the British Ministry of Magic has more or less declared open war by capturing and killing non-magical mutants.

Capturing and not killing your enemies only work if they can be kept in prison, with how corrupt the ministry is and how vulnerable Azkaban is only option is to kill them especially the more violent offenders when their friends can just revive them with a flick of their wand.

Harry should gather all the magical mutants and go public exposing the magical world and its massive bigotry that violates so many international laws.

Whoa! What a ride! Can't wait for part two!

How is that great fics are always so well hidden? Loved this story! It's quite fast paced and there's a LOT of stuff in here, but it was always coherent, nothing was unacceptably reasoned out, and the ending was very satisfying.

Also, the story gave me strong Tom Clancy vibes. Rainbow 6 specifically.

This is really well written and it incorporates that stereotypical comic book no kill rule pretty well.

It always annoys me when that comes up and nobody ever makes the logical counter-argument. Killing is a choice but so is not killing. If the good guys choose no killing then fail to capture or win a battle as a result of that choice, one that they would have won using lethal strategies... then it could be said every victim of the bad guys subsequent to that failure is partly the good guys' fault. They would not have been victims if not for the choice the good guys made.

I always think of the joker and batman in this one, how many times has the bat man captured the joker? How many victims has the joker made since the first or second capture?! At some point a logical batman would say the joker has to die as capture isn't working but he'd rather not be a killer. (That's just the overall theme, I know there's lots of iterations of batman and the joker so just work with me here :P ).

I wish J K would have read this because it really needs to be a film! Can't wait for the sequel. Absolutely Bloody Brilliant!

This is an excellent story. Fast paced and definitely one to read. Thanks for putting this on Fanfiction