darn Papparazi xD Souji did good LMAO tho he still have to do that confrence.

Love this. Of course SoujiYu would do something ridiculous to brighten his girl's day.

Thanks for writing.

Souji had some great ideas in this. And among other things, I loved the reference to the in-game cooking.

You have quite a knack for Persona characterizations! Yet another well-written look at life after the Investigation Team.

Had the paparazzi done some flattering editing, or did he really
[Egotistical and yet still engaging]

rapid fire tappity-tappity-tappity-taps filled the silence
[Quick and descriptive]

she'd checked the
[The contraction is properly used, but ‘had’ isn’t needed here is it?]

Quick and faintly amusing, but I think it suffered from a lack of connection to a certain setting – either time or place. We basically only have Souji, Rise, and a cameo from Inoue and all of that is talking heads except the brief scene of her walking in to see Souji hiding a pillow or whatever.

Okay. That was a twist.

Rise is far from being my favorite girl in P4, and I only ship her with Souji sporadically, but man, this fic is great. One of the better pieces I've read in the whole archive.

AWESOME!

Souji is a top-tier chef, badass and troll. Love his characterization as a loving, but cheeky young man, and not to mention Rise's bubbly humor. The two are just sweet together

Hilariously done, and the interaction between Rise and Souji was enjoyable as well. Kudos for fitting the game's cooking gimmick in there as well.

I'm going on a favoriting spree thanks to your stories! haha loving them all so far, great job!

LOL I *so* love your stories! I really do! _ They always guarantee a smile from me, I was literally grinning by the time I got to the end of this one. GREAT work!

This was such an adorable fic, and of course, love the cooking shout-outs. There's a serious lack of Souji x Rise fics around, and I'm so glad I came across this fic. Great job as usual.

Loved how you Characterized Souji. this one shot made my day :D

- Ringo

Ah I like Souji x Rise more every day, but not as much as Souji x Naoto. Liked the story it was cute.

This was really cute. I love the Souji x Rise pairing.