| Reviews for For As Long As I Live |
|---|
hatepickinnames chapter 7 . 5/22 I'm sure someone's mentioned this, but I hope the author is aware that she's made Bella 12 years old. More than once it's been said that she was in Texas 7 years ago, when she was 5. |
the claimed chapter 15 . 12/9/2019 the last sentance should be impossible since bella is a sheild against all mental attacks |
TheWhitlockGirl chapter 16 . 11/25/2019 I re-read this and still love it. Hope you come back to it. |
Caitcat789 chapter 11 . 6/9/2019 Charlotte and Eddie need to leave Bells and Petey alone. |
natztash chapter 16 . 2/25/2019 Update please |
anne.prossi15 chapter 16 . 2/2/2019 Update please |
andrewpine chapter 1 . 9/13/2018 Not finished,why? |
andrewpine chapter 8 . 3/13/2018 Eddie needs to die,soon. |
andrewpine chapter 7 . 3/13/2018 Alice is such a pushy annoying needs to make his mate start understanding the concept of personal space and that she can't just go and throw other people's things away just because she doesn't like he should cut her off from shopping it might sink 's calm everyone doesn't Carlisle act like a real coven leader and do something about fairy boy Eddie,he should know that Eddie is breaking the law by trying to keep mates he were a real leader he would either exile,destroy him or contact the Volturi and have them handle no we can't upset little Eddie. |
andrewpine chapter 6 . 3/13/2018 What will she do when she does remember? didn't he just feed the other day? looks like him and,Charlie hit it didn't even blink when she told him that her and fairy boy broke up. |
andrewpine chapter 5 . 3/13/2018 Why does Charlie always ask if it is Bella when she comes in the door,does everyone he knows just walk in the house without knocking? if she wants to know she needs to ask him he cannot not tell her. |
andrewpine chapter 4 . 3/13/2018 Why is it that they always dump the trash (Eddie),onto Tanya and her coven whenever he gets into one of his pissy moods over losing his blood bag pet? she needs to ask what kind of crap will Eddie be up to now that he lost his pet? |
andrewpine chapter 2 . 3/12/2018 Why would he change his diet so easily? Will Carlisle be shoving his head up Eddie ass and following his lead? |
andrewpine chapter 1 . 3/12/2018 It seems that Eddie has really destroyed her self-esteem I'd that is the way she sees did it on purpose to make it easier to control has Peter just found his mate? now all he has to do is convince her that Eddie has been lying to her about them being mates. this should be fun. finish this |
B4bidden chapter 16 . 12/3/2017 wish there was more to read pls update |