That was sad! But beautiful anyway!

*cries like a mofo*

*sniff sniff* i'm not really the one to step outta gokuharu and read sumfen like a yamabianchi fic... but... *cries more* IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!

the emotions and the way they were portayed! surely that mark of a great writer! so deep, and beautiful, and angsty... OMG i just wanna give yamamoto a hug... it so interesting to see the deeper side of yamamoto, and see what lurks under his smile.

the summary pulled me in instantly. while reading the fic, i couldn't help but feel entranced into the story and about how well written it was. i dont care if it was short, quality over quantity. short and (bitter) sweet.

gosh the ending... i wont spoil it for those who havent read it yet, but surely, that ending, is one of the saddest ones i've ever read in a fanfic...

please, dont ever stop writing! you are amazing (especially ur gokuharu fics)

Awww. I love how in-character Yamamoto was.. :) Anyway, aside from some grammar typos, it was great! Yamamoto's situation pricked at my heart. And that's good! Man, I hope more people write 80B. :l

Wow, just wow. How do you write so vividly abstract stories, and then make it seem easy! I loved the comparisions you make (I believe there is a grammatical term for it which I currently can't remember), especially with her hands that are like sand in an hourglass.

And is it just me that gets this feeling, or the guy here really is a gourmet who likes unusual cooking?

Please keep writing and do bother (please) to explore other fandoms:)

Peace' Hermy.

Very nice story, and the pairing is so rare too, so it's nice to see something new written for them. Good job!