Excellent!

I'm crying too

ahhh! D: amazing chapter. loving it so so much!

The moment Emily started to realize she should go find Naomi Three Days GraceThe Real You started playing from my laptop going "I will never give up on you, I see the real you" Awesome story btw (i don't know if this review sent before cause i was offline so I re wrote it )

Hi! I'm a french woman so really sorry for my futurs mistakes about the english :/
I discovered Naomily three months ago, and it changed my life. I'm bi, and maybe after seen them more attracted by women, and there the most beautiful couple i've ever know. I think I have watched the lake scene and the forrest scene, season 3 episode 6, a hundred times! This is my favorite video in the world, it take my breath away! Anyway, I was looking for anything about Kathryn Prescoot (my favorite of the both) and i found your story. I read in a week, and when i'm writing that I still tremble! I don't read a lot of thing, but i'm sure i'm gonna read this again and again!
I love everything about this story, the fact that you put some details from the eerie in your chapter, make me smile and it was like you give me a wink. During the first chapters, i live the sexual tension between them and when it exploses it was awesome! I had chills when i read the smut and stuff.
I had to write you a post and thank you for your work, you make my heart beat fast during this beautiful week and i think i'm going to see the Naomily story again now.
Love xxx

I thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish. I always pictured Naomi doing something artsy like photography. The passion you detailed between the characters felt so real at times! Thanks for writing and sharing this with us all! Cheers! :)

So, I'm having a really hard time believing I haven't read this story until now, and I deeply regret that because ... My God it was amazing. You're without a doubt truly a gifted writer. I hope you're still writing, for your own sake and for the rest us!

Also, I wanted to add that I actually shed a tear at your author's note at the end. I think it made me love the story even more that you met your best friend and girlfriend through writing your story. In many ways I can relate. :)

Thank you so much for this, it was truly a pleasure to read and though it may have been at fault for me being extremely behind with my exam right about now it was more than worth it.

All the best of luck in the future. Take care,

RS x

Well this was quite a story! I read your 'mammoth' and now I'm curious.. What was your original plan for this ending? like, before you saw Fire's synopsis ( watched fire and cried for about half an hour and now I'm plotting to murder Jess Britain. Or at least slash her car's tires.)
Anyway, great story, really :]]

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Dude this was AWESOME!
You need to write a sequel ASAP

Fucking amazing. I read your entire story and I enjoyed it so tremendously I nearly fucking cried at the end... So sad to see it end, but all good things must come to an end, right? Anway, you're an amazing writer, and I'm definitely going to keep tabs on the next stuff you write (:
Love, Sydney xxx

Oh my gosh! What a twist :o Really didn't think Freddie would find out this early :/ So excited for the rest though :D You are such a great writer and a lovely person xo

At first I felt the anticipation Emily had before doing the shoot. Them the rush if actually doing the shoot. Damn that was good. I'm almost caught up. Really keeps getting I'm the way of reading this fantastic piece of writing. And how I hate it so. But almost there. Love it. Is amazing

Wow. One of those stories that I'm really looking forward to reading!:) Follows the Skins theme really well xo

This isn't going to interfere with the long road home, is it? Lizzie can do both, yes? Really excited to see what you two come up with.