One of the best Mass Effect stories on this site in my opinion. A shame it's dead. Hope you'll come back to it one day.

Volksbrot

Would you please post this under male and not female hate seeing stories for the male Shepard listed under female. If I wanted a damn male Shepard story I would have searched male. And if you are this desperate for someone to read it to post it under the wrong sex of character I feel bad for you. Just fix it, please.

Beautiful story ruined by the fact that it has been abandoned.

Well that was fucking pointless cruelty.

Among the best fics i read. Many people see Shepard as a not very bright, not sure what the reason, maybe hes badly written, not sure.

Your Shepard is however what Shepard should be, not only an expert in killing, but also very cunning. So cunning in fact that he can "play" with Miranda, and win. Really like the relationship between those two.

ME3 is out, perhaps you will resume writing due to that fact. I'm really hoping you do.

You are doing a wonderful job with this story and hope you update soon!

Great story! A different take, and I really enjoy your Shepard. I like the edgier quality you give him, as well as the way that he messes with people's minds.

Keep up the great writing!

very nice

Looks good so far, can't wait for more. Keep it up.

Not every one can be Hackett, some people have to use e-mail.

Keep up to Good Work, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.

that was really good. by far my favorite chapter yet.

Jack is an uncontrollable psycho who doesn't even have herself under any modicum of self-control. In the playthrough to be used for ME3 she dies in the final mission.

What a beautiful friendship you got going there between Shep and Jack. Nice one with Miranda thou, i like how you got Shep to play her. It is going to be interesting to see which one bows out first, my monies on Miranda due to her loyalty mission but thats just me.

Ooo...this is getting interesting. Now I can't wait to see more.