lol what was shego junior and bonnie doing at that hotel in paris

This was enjoyable. I like how you related the action.

I can easily see the women getting into a cat fight.

Thanks!

You should do write a fanfic in the POV of Diego or bonnie! That would be so EPIC!

A fairly nice and funny concept, just ruined by the huge buildup when at the latest half way through it was obvious who the pairs were lol

LOL! That was good! I liked this story. :) Super hard plaster stopping Shego tho? I hope KP remembers that for the next time she needs to stop the villainess. :) I liked the name changes for the funnies. I recognized them immediately! :) Keep up the good work!

That was hilarious! I was wondering why Ron would laugh at a story such as that, then I found out the girls were Shego and Bonnie. Cool story!

Funny story,

poor Bonnie and Shego, but with their temper what would you expect.

Wouldn't Shego be able to burn herself out of the plaster.

keep up the good writing,

reader101w

This was priceless. As the story continued, I knew I had guessed the identities of the perps. I'm also proud to say I got every one of your comic strip parodies. Well, maybe not proud, as that may clue you in on my age, but then again you're not that old, so how would you know about some of these comic chestnuts? But, I digress.

And welcome to the world of beta-ing, Katsumara!

Nicely done!

MA

Wow. Just...wow.

Oh wow this is so messed up and hell yeah! It's funny! I dunno why but I just feel like Shego should have won the fight for the room, LOL... Still the event was defenately the most embarrassing thing in her carrer I take it, XD.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Funny third person recitation there of four very well known, to the KP Verse anyway, and the brawl...

A good day had by those in Middleton.

LOL!

CB73

Nice story and I wonder how much English profanity the hotel's other patron's learned during the altercation.

daccu65

pretty good there Eddy.
Larry (Sentinel 103)

I gotta admit, this made me chuckle a bit: I could really see Shego going crazy like this, and with Bonnie's attitude? Snap!

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Mike.

Awesome work, buddy. Lovely author's note for nebster. I hope he gets well soon. :(

As far as the story itself, I liked the idea a ton. Pretty cool image to picture Kim eating while Ron looks over the paper. Sort of like the Drs. Possibles and what not. Keep up the good work!