This was really good! And when I say that, I mean that I don’t have the words to express how good I think this is! It was so dark and gloomy and mysterious, but then you start giving us glimpses into what’s happening and how the past and the future is linked and I’m beyond intrigued. I’m just so bummed that there aren’t more chapters. I know it’s been ages, but if the spark of creativity hit and you were so inclined to finish this off, man I’d be here in a heartbeat to read it. But thanks for sharing what you did write because it was damn good!

More please! :)

Good grief, am I misreading or does that mean that SAM is the murderer? You must continue with this!

The manifestations of Molly and Sam are very telling, especially the latter as one would not expect Gene to talk to a ghost. It os a measure of his desperation, as is that frantic union with Alex. Magnificent writing. But who is the killer?

Grim, dark, and superbly atmospheric. This is great.

oooo...i think i know wats gunna happen! sorry...um...I love this! I just found it...I love it! Really addictive and chilling...shows the characters well in a different light...deals well with the harsh side of policing...which i think is left out a little even in the actual series!

Ok, this is proper scary. I have chills.

This story is so chilling, I love the way it's written looking forward to the next part.

Hope we'll have a new chapter soon!

Wonderfully dark

This is getting to be a proper scary ghost story...

Am pretty sure that the references to 12 are because of Molly, but your fic is absolutely packed with mystery and just sheer brilliance. Cannot wait for more!

so criptic...lots going on it this story.

Wow - this fic is amazing & your writing is stunning!

Please update soon :)

Fran
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Your use of words is brilliant - too many gems to list. Absolutely loving it. It's very bleak and mysterious, but I like it. Really don't know where you're going to go next.