Oh my dear Merlin that was so beautiful

3 days! I bet I couldn't get all this done in 4! You did excellent, EXCELLENT!

Oh my wow. Wow. That was amazing and breathtaking. It has (as cliché as this sounds) left me breathless. I swear I didn't breath as I was reading this. The characterization was so beautiful and your writing style is -uh - perfection! It was so smooth and agh! I loved it so much! One word: wow. No, three words: WOW FREAKING WOW

xoxo

I do not know what words to use because I do not want my review to sound pretentious. So, I'm gonna try, because ironically,words won't be enough. This made my heart ache and I mean in the literal sense like I actually felt it ache and dear god, emotions. If someone were to ask me to describe the word beautiful I would tell them to read this fic and I would tell themthat. that is beautiful." its beautiful in its sadness and beautiful in its pain and positively giddy in its finality. Queen Nightingale is the moon of JPLE, and you are a star. You burn bright and without you, the sky of JPLE wouldn't be complete. I thank you, with my full heart for taking the time-three days, wtf- to write this.

So cute! But, deep.

Amazing!

Absolutely amazing!

No words - I'm just speechless! GOddamn it!

Great! I love the progression of their relationship through the years.

"They might die tomorrow; so it's just as well that it happened like this, even though he has hurt her and she has hurt him in the past. Explanations take too much time and some things are understood even when left unsaid.

And he thinks it's going to be enough:

That he loves her like all the stars in the wide open sky."

WOW. JUST WOW. JUST BLODDY WOW.

Hey...it's...really good. Really. I've read tons of JPLE fanfiction, but this one is just simply perfect. Everything is just like it should be. And wanna know something? I cried. In the middle part, when James thought he would to DIE for her, I just realized he will and I started to cry like a little girl. I haven't any fitting describtion of that story, but it had hit me and I'm just going to read it once more and again. Because it's just like it should be :)

PS: In case of mistakes, I'm sorry, but English is not my first language. But I still hope that my thoughts are clear.

Wow. That was amazing

Oh my goodness. I'm actually speechless right now because I love James and Lily, especially your characterisation of them, and I love this story and I love your writing style. It was beautiful :)

this is quite wonderful and heart wrenching and soulful; I adore it. the characterization is wonderful and the simple yet elegant plot rings true to all I ever hoped / dreamed/ thought Lily and James were. fantastic.

Wo-ow. Pretty amazing for three days, sweetheart. Better then Queen Nightingales... In my opinion at least. But, brilliant. Absolutely amazing. Love the style.

THIS MADE MY DAY. I love your theme- stars? Whatever; it's wonderful.