i loved the story but the rape was so not needed. It was just a major nasty factor not needed.

awesome story! off to read the sequel!

Hey! OMG! I'm reading your story right now...and wow! This is SUPER SO GOOD. I rad another story of yours before this one, and it was totally awesome too! Please continue...

funny, sad, and finally... beautiful ! nice job, wonderful fic !

just as briliant and fantastic as i remembered..bring back the good old season one / two days of sydney and vaughn, i say! genevra* xxo

years ago (obviously) i first read this story and i absolutely adored it only i never reviewed it (and if i did it was under a different name), making it a nightmare to re-read as unfortunately i let school and gilmore girls take over my life...but after days and hours of looking i have finally found this story again and because what i remember of it was so wonderful and amazing, i'm going to read it again! the fact that i remember this story is just testament to how geat it is...so thanks! genevra* x

sigh... i can't believe i'm saying this but i'm glad that they didn't kiss after all because this makes the story so much more realistic and wonderful. Will's a little annoying no? lol

-Jenn

YAY! I. LOVED. THIS. CHAPTER.! It was absolutely wonderful... i wish something more could've happened but I know that it wouldn't have and this way is much more realistic and... (dare I say it?) tantalizing. ;)

-Jenn

Hey! I am definitely loving this story so far even though it's already over... I heard about you from Becky Dream Writer 4 Life (Isn't she great? Did you read her bio?) and decided to check out your stuff.

Have to say that it is wonderful and I can't wait to get to the other 22 chapters... would MUCH rather to this than study for the chem final tomorrow... :(

-Jenn

This was such a great story! I'm glad you decided to continue it to the end...and I can't wait for the sequel! I don't really have any suggestions, its perfect the way it is. If you want, you can go read my Alias fanfic called "If Only" I just started it and would appreciate any feedback! Thanks so much and once again, a great job!

Okay, answered my own question. Tense story. Nice ending. I'm reading the sequel...

Great story! Super realistic, romantic, sexy, the whole nine yards. Great job!

I plan to keep reading the rest, but GOD that was beautiful. I have tears in my eyes.

awww...that was so great...i loved it...now for the next story tho...keep up the great work...

wow...that was great...sry it took me so long to read it...its just that i was at the Cape and then i went to PA...as you could see i wasnt newhere near a comp...but it was great...cant wait to read the epilogue & the continuation of the story...im so far behind...well, i still love it...its gorgeous i tell ya gorgeous...