Ahhh I loved it. Thanks for the fluff.

I love how distracted Rosto is. It's easy to allow the characters to focus solely on each other in this kind of scene. You did not forget to give Rosto depth and purpose aside from trying to 'get the girl'

It's nice to see Beka develop on her own without it (sometimes more or less literally) being shoved down her throat.

Oh gods. That was wonderful. I loved that little piece of humor at the end.

Loved it. This one-shot has the right amount of fluff and romance. Best part is the barkeeper's thoughts at the end about winnning a bet with Aniki.

Loved it! Very well written.

Hehe, nice to see a cheery one this time. That bit at the end with the barkeep was a good touch.

I am in love with this oneshot! This is actually the third time I've read it lol

LOL! Poor Aniki, having to seperate from some of her gold! In other news, Yay Rosto/Beka!

lol, took em long enough

this was sweet. Though you'd think people would learn not to bet against Rosto. XD

Ahaha I love the ending, with the barkeep thing. ;) And, just in general, it's nice to see you writing something lighter! :)

Very nicely written! The dialogue was unique, in a good way. It was the opposite of cheesy (I hope the opposite of cheesy is something good and hopefully as yummy as cheese). Er..They were very on character and I really like how you just eased them into that and also you kept it at a distance kind of like um..how to explain..um..oh! How about an example from Twilight? You didn't say something like 'With that she crushed her lips to his, her body flush with his.' Something like that anyway (I don't like Twilight). It was very subtle. And the barkeep, hehe, Aniki lost two gold nobles! Haven't seen anything from you in awhile though. I think you do just a well at fluff as you do at angst, honestly, I'm not sure if I like the angst or the fluff better..hm..well, I am a cheery person..I think I'll go with fluff. Oh have you read my latest chapters? Probably not, I hear you've been very busy lately with writing projects. If you get the chance, I would like you to read it and tell me what you think. I think I have to stop typing now though. My computer is acting stragely and I'm running out of room. Oh well! Always looking foward to your next work! -Polaris ;)

Oh my gosh... you weren't lying! He didn't die! Oh, and I liked it a lot.

*contented smile*

Aw, I loved it. Very nice job on this. Sweet, but not cheesy. :D Keep up the good writing!