This is perfection. I stumbled into your story because I was craving a Guy/OC fiction which didn't involve servants or women from the future and this...well, you really built the characters, their developing relationships, Afton's background in a great way. I love all the details about her healing abilities and the "Goddess-theme", which you presented very cleverly. The end is heart-breaking but, again, flawless. Please, please, please, tell me you haven't given up on writing the sequel because I need it!
Hugs from Italy

I have just re read this after an age. Its a lovely piece, and I feel; it my be time to tell us what happened next?

Delightful. I wish you'd written the sequel. I'd really love for them both to have a chance at happiness together.

Just read your story from start to end. You had me going with the priest in the field - thought trouble was stirring up.

I loved Aftons character and the way Guy was when he was with her. Just GUTTED he left.

If you are still writing I think there is a sequel here... Hoping for a sequel...

This is one of my fave fanfics. Thanks so much. ;0)

Beautiful. I love your writing, and would like to see more. Truly wonderful. I hope this story is not finished, I do hate unhappy endings, but if it is, it is no less beautiful.

Well done.

This was wow! One of the best stories I've read so far. Hope there will be more :)

awwwwwwwwww. I read your whole story to background as I usually do my fanfictions. I chose cinematic orchestrations today and gladly so they made your story even more amazing and powerful! I loved and admired it so very much! Everything was beautiful and lovely. You have a gift, that is undoubted.

I dont know if you have posted the sequel as I believe you mentioned wanting to do but I will definitley want to come back for more :).

Even without a sequel, this story stands alone as a masterful continuation and I was heartbroken for Afton as Guy left.

Noooo he can't leave, they are so good for each other

I'm glad we got to hear about Afton's husband, sad but exactly what Guy needed to hear

I just ran accross this story the other day - it is very beautifully written! Can not wait for the sequel! :)

Great chapter, loved the paragraph about his eyes. Wonder if the person watching them is going to get them into trouble!

Wow, you've written loads since I last checked. It's really good, the characterisations are great and I really like the relationship that is forming between Guy and Afton

Really good descriptions of both sides of Guy, great characterisation.

Just found this wonderful story and read it in one go. You have written Guy's chacter perfectly. Would love to read more. Thanks !

Great chapter, the good side of Guy has appeared!
I liked the inner battle going on in Guy!

The back story between her and Edward seems really interesting, wonder if Guy will let her help him