Not bad- It's a litte too bare-bones for my taste, but that's what a song-fic is, I understand. I do like the way they talk to each other. I'll have to check this song out.

ah... i love this song. 3

no one i know knows this band, ahaha. i like how you turned it into a songfic sort of thing. though, you should separate the lyrics from the dialogue, it's sometimes confusing for people who don't know the lyrics off by heart already ;D

i can see why you would write to this song though, it's powerful for the ears :D