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![]() ![]() ![]() I just HAD to comment on this chapter..." Let's go outside," Sam said leading me out the double doors. I looked over at Rachel who clutched her purse. " Need my shank," she mouthed towards me. I smiled and shook my head.-BEST fuckin thing I've read in a VERY long time! hahahahaha! I actually pictured this and it reminded me of how crazy goofy my cousin and I are together! Of course we'd only be joking but it's fun nonetheless! ;) OH and I definitely would've knocked Emily's ass out if I was Leah...ESPECIALLY after the saying what she did during the wedding...what nerve Emily has...;( |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) No problem! Lmao. Pineapples on your pizza aren't THAT bad, Jacob. I had a fun time reading Leah's dance session...Because it reminds me of myself when I'm cleaning or cooking or whatnot. LMAO. Jacob's gift was SO sweet. Lawl. It amuses me that not only Jake, but other guys aswell, think that when a girl cries when you give them something, that something is wrong. Lol. It's not always that way. Loved the fic! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) Your welcome! I'm glad you liked! And thanks for the shoutout! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally it them remembering stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another reason could be because Leah is a good dancer. The flash back could be like in a club and they're dancing with eachother for the first time. It could all be played out from there or whatever. Throw some club remixes in there and stuff! Idk. The chapter was very cute:) They're a hot couple. Lmao ;) I can't believe there's gonna only be one reason left! I can't wait though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is she...pregnant? The pranks were hilarious. Mygoodness:) Gave me a laugh! I love the relationship between the two! Excellent job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am totally in love with this fic so far;) The chapter was amazing! I loved the flashbacks that you put! |
![]() ![]() ![]() how about friendship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol good chapter and woo for the shout out! I think Jacob should have apologized first for the comment about the kids thing... but oh well... and for a final idea maybe have him talk about her courage through everything and her stubborness? Lol I dunno... anywho I loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This just keeps getting better and better. I like the fact that Bella had a boy instead of Renesmee so, unless by some weird ass universal conspiracy, Jacob couldn't imprint. Very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the song at the beginning. It's a good set up for the chapter. I think it's cute the way they flirt with each other openly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the comments exchanged between Leah and Jacob. It was sweet and sensual. Please continue writing. The community needs you and there are very few Blackwater fanfics in updated existance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update. We need more updated Blackwater fics on ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwwww that was a really cute chapter! I cant wait until the next one! |