Reviews for Never try to out smart a Fox
Fgougeon chapter 1 . 8/16/2018
why is naruto still a kid
Monster King chapter 6 . 7/24/2018
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon.
Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 6 . 11/3/2017
Please update
Guest chapter 5 . 4/6/2017
Bad spelling and grammar.
You need a beta chapter 1 . 1/30/2017
You made so many mistakes in this chapter. The first, and maybe the worst, is calling Captain Commander Yamamoto "Captain Yamato". Also, you've made many, many, spelling and grammar mistakes. Why does Orochimarus poison attack the "music" and bone? It's an interesting concept, but you've ruined it with your mistakes.
Twilight-Lloyd chapter 6 . 1/30/2017
Welcome back! It's always good to see a writer come back to their spellbound readers. Good luck with your military applications, it's an excellent opportunity.
I give you a blessing of Dancing Kirby!...
animerule64 chapter 5 . 11/17/2016
Add more chapters please
Monster King chapter 5 . 9/25/2016
Good story but did you give up on it or not?
Danny R chapter 5 . 6/26/2014
I look for the next chapter.
uscias chapter 5 . 10/26/2013
Please update soon.
MiloWaffles chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Could have been ok, but you really... REALLY need to proof this.
Mino chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
You really need a beta, but i like ur general idea
Lemarteskun chapter 5 . 2/25/2013
awesome hope there is more
Naruhina1519 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Pleasee keep update MORE
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JustAFool chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
some grammar mistakes but nothing too bad. Their reunion was kind of a let down because I could have seen it being funny with his stubborn goofy self against Unohana's demon smile kinda of persona.
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