| Reviews for Never try to out smart a Fox |
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Fgougeon chapter 1 . 8/16/2018 why is naruto still a kid |
Monster King chapter 6 . 7/24/2018 Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon. |
Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 6 . 11/3/2017 Please update |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/6/2017 Bad spelling and grammar. |
You need a beta chapter 1 . 1/30/2017 You made so many mistakes in this chapter. The first, and maybe the worst, is calling Captain Commander Yamamoto "Captain Yamato". Also, you've made many, many, spelling and grammar mistakes. Why does Orochimarus poison attack the "music" and bone? It's an interesting concept, but you've ruined it with your mistakes. |
Twilight-Lloyd chapter 6 . 1/30/2017 Welcome back! It's always good to see a writer come back to their spellbound readers. Good luck with your military applications, it's an excellent opportunity. I give you a blessing of Dancing Kirby!... |
animerule64 chapter 5 . 11/17/2016 Add more chapters please |
Monster King chapter 5 . 9/25/2016 Good story but did you give up on it or not? |
Danny R chapter 5 . 6/26/2014 I look for the next chapter. |
uscias chapter 5 . 10/26/2013 Please update soon. |
MiloWaffles chapter 1 . 6/5/2013 Could have been ok, but you really... REALLY need to proof this. |
Mino chapter 2 . 3/3/2013 You really need a beta, but i like ur general idea |
Lemarteskun chapter 5 . 2/25/2013 awesome hope there is more |
Naruhina1519 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 Pleasee keep update MORE () |
JustAFool chapter 1 . 6/6/2012 some grammar mistakes but nothing too bad. Their reunion was kind of a let down because I could have seen it being funny with his stubborn goofy self against Unohana's demon smile kinda of persona. |