Wish there was more to this story. At first I thought Sara would have been his half sister so I was confused till like the second last sentence. I am really curious how Snape would act around a sibling. That would have been interesting to read.

I felt like Harry regressed several years in this chapter. Even though he has always been insecure because of the Dursley’s and Lockhart’s actions, his actions and mannerisms in this chapter made me think he was closer to 6 years old than 12.

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While I don’t agree with the review your Chapter 11 intro note says you received where someone called you a pervert I also don’t agree with you about the spanking issue. I know corporal punishment is a controversial issue but statistics show that spanking a child does not encourage good behaviour or trust between the child and the adult. I am not going to argue because that is pointless, especially on an old story, but every time you have Snape threaten Harry with a spanking if he puts himself or others in danger I cringe and get uncomfortable. I will never agree with another parent that thinks threatening violence to their child by their own hand will encourage obedience. It won’t. It just encourages them to be fearful of their punishments and makes them want to hide or lie after doing something wrong. While I like this version of Snape every time he threatens to spank Harry I lose respect for him.

Love this, please make more! Even though it has rape in it, I like this. And not being a pervert, can snape spank harry in one chapter? You don't have to, and can harry find a lost dog or cat? Anyway love this!

Fantastic story! Well written besides a few grammar mistakes lol can’t wait for more!

. . .Now.

Is this story ever going to be finished, I once again started to read it, got totally immersed and again found it unfinished, please, please continue

Please update

I love what you have so far! I like the twist of Snape’s mother and stepfather being the abusers instead of his father. I hope to see what happens next!

Lockhart better not hurt my baby

good so far, but i dont find myself enjoying it when harry trusts snape so earlier on, but perhaps im just a sadist

I love how Vernon just basically told him that doing the do is wrong. At least he has some morals. Love this story BTW!

Poor guys,both dad and son

Should I tell them? I'm gonna tell them.