So sad

I thought this was absolutely lovely. To be honest I'm not really a songfic fan and this worked just as well without the lyrics, so well done you!

Hope there's more to come.

"Oh, sweet misery, and there's no place on Earth I'd rather be, yeah, cause you're not the one I need, you're just the one that I want, makes perfect sense to me..."
I love that song :)
This was awesome, yeah, it really did fit, and I'm afraid I may have to steal this idea from you, the semi-song one, because I found a Tiva song the other day :D
It worked so well, the combination of song and writing, and I do think its a fantastic idea, well done, and great title too :D
I really don't think I should be praising you when you have just ripped Van Rigsby to shreds. I will now have to ignore the YouTube ban and watch some shippy scenes to cheer myself up.
I know it sounds weird, but you dispersed them in the most eerily beautiful kind of way. I can't think of anyone else who would be able to pull it off quite like this.
The last part was the best, including the last little bit of song, that worked brilliantly.
I really...well it was fantastic in the very worst way possible, thanks very much for writing, it was a truly great read, depite being very sad.
Thanks for the dedication, I am proud :D
And I desperately hope it will be alright, I'm panicking just thinking about it though...
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It's a good songfic. I've never heard of the song myself, but the lyrics seem to go well with the rest.

Wow, you did a terrific work. I love it and I'm so hoping you decide to extend this story and maybe give it a happy ending or write another one about them. The writers of the show have been so mean with all the shippers of this couple that we really need to read these so well written stories.
Btw, I’ve just checked the song, first time I hear it. Nice choice.

Please write another chapter! This was brilliant! I loved it! Since they probably won't fix it till next season I really need a fanfic to fix it...

Anyway I really like your writing too

The song is beautiful... an this whole thing is perfect.
So sad though :'( I feel for both of them so much! I hope they get back together in secret in the TV show. And just pretend to be awkward at work or something. Anyway, back to the fic :P
The 'He would have chosen her.' paragraph is just so perfect *sniff* I hate you for writing this well. *glares*
And their little conversation.
*cries hysterically*
I hate you.
I love this.
I love you. :P
Oh, and you should write Rigspelt more. But you should also write Jisbon more. But you never listen to me so i guess it doesn't matter :P This is brilliant. And yes, i would kidnap you if you owned the mentalist and write Jisbon. :P
Really loved this, it's amazing :)
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