Reviews for A Chance in Time
OoW chapter 23 . 7/23
I'm enjoying this story, it has a pretty decent storyline and you write the characters well, but there are so many changes in tense throughout various chapters that I'm halfway to giving up to be quite honest as it is just so annoying, which is such a shame.
bookwander101 chapter 42 . 7/17
Loved it!
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 42 . 7/9
I’m pretty sure this is the second time I have read this story and I have loved it each time. This is one of my favorite time turner stories! Thank you for sharing.
Aki chapter 5 . 5/26
I'm going to give up at this point. The first chapters are written very simply and the main character (Hermione) is absurdly OOC. Your Hermione in the future may have crush on long-dead Teacher!Snape, makes a teacher/parent sleep in her bed for warmth, is best friends with Headmaster!Minerva, is no longer attached at the mouth to Ron, idiotically uses the time turner in Gryffindor common areas and has a strange fixation on her 'real' age of 22.

There's also some extremely odd phrases all over. One example: "Making Hermione laugh at Minerva making a joke. She didn't make them often." Was she laughing at the joke or at Minerva? Suggest instead: "Hermione laughed. Minerva didn't make jokes often."

On another track: Hermione in the past is a transfer student who has lost her memory. If so, why does she still 'remember' all of these 'old friends' and professors that are making her smile all the time? Why does the Room of Requirement show up on the Marauder's Map now but Snape, listening in a few feet away, does not? It's just little things like these that keep slapping me out of true immersion in this story. I question why Snape is 'falling' for Hermione this quickly and I'm uncomfortable with the future pairing of this story given the age difference while both are still in a boarding school.
Caramel4me chapter 25 . 5/25
I wanted to like this so bad but I just couldn't get past some of the technicalities. Shes so worried about changing things and saying she can't tell anyone anything not the littlest thing and yet she goes and tell Dumbledore and Minerva EVERYTHING literally EVERYTHING about the future. What. She has no filter for someone is supposed to be in control and smart, it's driving me crazy. I keep trying to push through these things here and there just so I can get to the end but I just can't anymore it's so many and too often that little idiotic things like this happen.
I will say that besides that I was enjoying your fic. So thank you for doing what you do.
AEdmo13 chapter 22 . 5/10
And I’m crying. Bloody letter making me cry
kcarfang chapter 42 . 5/1
I loved it! The emotional rollercoaster of this story was fabulous.
meganmathews1 chapter 33 . 4/26
I too love Alan Rickman, but does anyone else picture a Kylo Ren instead of Alan Rickman when they read this? Just me? Haha moving on...
meganmathews1 chapter 29 . 4/25
My heart is breaking!
meganmathews1 chapter 18 . 4/25
Chapter 18. Hot Damn.
meganmathews1 chapter 10 . 4/24
I love the inscription in the book!
meganmathews1 chapter 5 . 4/24
Hilarious! Teenage Sirius cracks me up.
meganmathews1 chapter 2 . 4/23
Well I finished chapter 2 and I'm hooked. I always wanted Albus and Minerva to be together too!
Guest chapter 42 . 4/19
Loved it. Great job
Bella chapter 20 . 3/28
What the hell is Daily PROFIT? Did your Beta miss this?
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