| Reviews for My Last Few Days With You |
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Western-Otaku chapter 23 . 7/6/2018 I feel bad for Riku, he's being a supportive best friend to the Sora and Kairi and as payback, he gets ordered to be a servant for the day while the couple get to be King and Queen. Guy can't get a break XD |
relena soulheart chapter 74 . 9/7/2017 A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. :) |
Jace Stevens chapter 74 . 9/3/2017 Been quite the journey, eh? Great story from start to finish. :) Inspired me to get back into romantic stories. Thanks for the fun! |
Spiderfan626 chapter 74 . 9/2/2017 I love happy endings... nicely done! :D |
FandomChanger chapter 73 . 8/12/2017 Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh! My heart! I love this story so much, it gives me so many feelings! I patiently await the next chapter! 3 |
HoPe-BriNgeR1 chapter 71 . 7/31/2017 Did you just change this chapter's title? I thought it was called the Final Outing? |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/30/2017 YEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/30/2017 THE SHIP HAS SET SAILED! |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/30/2017 WTF? |
HoPe-BriNgeR1 chapter 71 . 7/29/2017 So when will you update this? |
Jay chapter 9 . 2/17/2017 So I've just now started to get into this story and I just have to complain that there is entirely too much detail in this story. I know you want to capture the scene perfectly and all, but it's just too much at times. For example, the audience really didn't need to know that when Kuuki arrived home she didn't just park, she "stopped, put her emergency break on, shifted gears to park..." etc. It's just monotonous. Also, if Sora got a sunburn and the very next day was taken to the hospital, it would still take some more time to diagnose him. Theyd have to run tests and be sure that it was what they thought it was before giving him a definite yes or no. Also, I'm assuming the skin cancer he developed was some form of carcinoma, particularly basal cell carcinoma. It's one of the most common skin cancers and different from malignant melanoma in the way that BCC develops as a flesh colored or reddish lump rather than a dark mole. I would also like to point out that if the doctors somehow caught the cancer after one freaking day his survival chances are entirely in his favor. So this has to be some freaky cancer if he gets sick. I don't wanna sound like a bitch, I just appreciate it when the author spends some time researching to make their story more realistic. I intend to read the entire story, so I'll update on how my opinion has changed throughout the story. |
Guest chapter 20 . 12/6/2016 For now is a very lovely story, I enjoy the balance from sadness and happyness, and it's also very long! Great job dude |
supernoob257 chapter 70 . 11/30/2016 Finish please? |
MackBlade chapter 39 . 6/20/2016 Well they are using a space ranger themed attack so who knows...XD |
Shirayuki HimeCP chapter 70 . 6/13/2016 First, Wecome back, and second please continue to update :) From: Chicoco Phantomhive |