Gobi is a dolphin-horse. There is no wolf tailed beast, and the seven-tailed beast is a beetle. All of your text is centered, and you are having some issues with breaking up your paragraphs. Fix these things, and you'll probably have an awesome story on your hands.

more please this is really good

Continue or face orochi-pedo aka orochimaru

I really do hope you continue this story

yea gaara isn't going to be a crazy killer guy like he is when he is 1st introduced in the canon

lol now instead of chasing one prankster around iruka has 9 to keep tabs on XD

it will be interesting to see what happens next

im pretty sure that minato and the others are pissed at orochimaru or will be when they find out that he is reason their kids got taken from them

I'm kinda surprised Naruto seems worried about Zabuza, since he has all the original 9 AND their senseis with them.
Looking good. I'm looking forward to your next update.
Update soon, Kay?

Very nice way of ending the chapter *claps hands together and smiles* will they get to meet the two tail cat demon and her jinjuriki? Update soon ok

Oh come on! Don't end there that's unfair!...:D

Please one more chapter please pretty please with ramen on top

Finish it! You've got me pumped up! Finish it!

Fun, fun, fun! Demon vs. demon! Looking foreword to the next chapter! Wonder what you'll do with Zabuza and Haku...? I like how different and fun this story is written so you should definetly keep writing ;)

One word, AMAZING!