It's hard for me to put into words what has kept me coming back to this fic time and time again, but I guess in a word I would say it's "beautiful." There's just something about it that takes my breath away. It's so bittersweet, and the end leaves me wanting to sob and binge-eat a tub of ice cream to assuage my sorrow. Just lovely. Thank you.

Hahahahahaha PAIN... I LOvE IT...
I DOnT CaRe I kNOW I'm A Sick FUckER!

It's amazing! I love your writing style, i love everything about this.

Oh my god I loved it so much I don't think I ever cried at the same time as being turned the hell before omg ur writing style is A thank u so much

I loved this story it fits directly with the anime _

It was so intense and then intense, but, like in a different way. You fucked me up, man... This isn't right... I swear, if I start crying.. *gets dragged away by Soren* Sorry about him! He's sober!

Oh man. This really is my favorite mxn story, even if the end always makes me cry. I read this a long while back and the part where Mello literally gives all of himself to Near at the end, indicating something was very wrong, always kinda stayed with me. So I'm glad I found it again so I can properly thank you. :) Faved!

xx Ninjabelle

everything hurts
so many feels
I KNEW IT WAS TRAGEDY BUT I COULDN\'T STOP CRY

loved it

Hm, aren't I late to the party?

Putting that aside, I have to say: This fic is sublime. I adored every minute of it, especially the sex. I was convinced of genuineness by all of the characters, and even though you weren't particularly indulgent on their emotions, you didn't need to be.

I know a good fanfiction (and a good writer) when I see it, and you ma'am, are definitely one of the top here on FF.

It's okay Near, We can be Emo and alone together. D:

I... I... *bites lip* Oh screw it. *Starts crying all over this story*

You managed, without really explaining emotions, to give Near (emotionless yet adorable little Near) genuinely believeable, DEEP emotions. NEAR! *huggles your wonderful Near*

And as for Mello, I don't even know what to say. I LOVE Mello. I love Mello when he's like THIS. So gruff and insensitive and crass, but that tiny collection of sweetness...

Why did MELLO have to die? Poor Mello... :(

I loved this story. I found it absolutely compelling, I couldn't stop reading because I was hooked by how you described Mello and Near's relationship.

How those encounters began in one way and then turned into something deeper.

The ending was sad but at least they both got to know that they loved each other.

Good job!

That was so hot. And sweet. And sad.

Gaah. I can't describe how much I loved this story. :)

It was really sad, and sweet, how Mello had saved his "I love you.", and said it to Near at that exact moment. :(

Cry. Cry. Cry.

Simply, Beautiful. (":

It's sad, but really well written!