Reviews for Pretty Vacant
Haley-joos chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
B-b-b-but Clace *cries forever*
Hammer22 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Such a beautiful story:) It kinda made my heart ache for Jace:( he's to sweet. Get job.
BlueSkyMornings chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
HAHA I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL! When I read that I was like... well apparently I now ship incest. #dealwithit (only hash tags didn't yet exsist, neither did twitter. And if it did it wasn't popular yet). That was really heartbreaking. I kinda wanted a dramatic ending where he died or something to prove he'd love her after life, but that's just the achy sad part of my heart being all dramatic after reading this. Very lovely :)
xxkitkatkatexx chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Okay, so there's not very good optiond for the couple. It's either Jary or Clace - maybe JayCla? Or JayClare?

Think about it...

OMFG I AM JUST LIKE YOU I LOVE THEIR RELATIONSHIP SO MUCH IT'S NOT FUNNY. AND THIS STORY MADE ME CRY. SO YOU'D BETTER WRITE A HAPPY ONE SOON COZ RIGHT NOW I'M DEPRESSED!
leechlover1901 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I completely understand that Jace angst thing you have! I feel the exact same way! I mean I love Jace and Clary but reading this made my heart ache and I loved it (I think I might be masochistic. haha) good job, please keep writing
angelica chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
oh my god you are amazing and should consider become a writer. beautiful diction, varied syntax, and a deep understanding of jaces feelings and motivations although i dont beleieve clary to be fickle enough to renounce the love of jace for whome she so wholeheartedly fought for
mfo chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Ho-ly crap. This was amazing. You are seriously incredible. I have one question though. Why did jace break up with Clary? (If they were even dating?) I felt soo sad for Jace. I 3 you and your story. Could you maybe make more than a oneshot? It would make me so happy. Okay, this is getting long, so... TTFN( hee hee, Tigger says that all the time.

xoxoxo Be the Crayon
ilyPJP19 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
OH. MY. GOD.

You are so SPONGY :)
KisstheRain14 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Oh my God. I was reading, and I was like... wtf? what's going on? and then it hit when you described the suit. God.

Just a question: do they know that they're not siblings?

anyway, it was amazingly good. amazing, amazing, amazing. i love angst too, and this wasn't like the normal, cookiecutter omg-clary's-getting-married scenario. you made everything seem REALER (more real?), not just... plain, I guess.

I'm rambling. Okay. This was GOOD.