*blushing*

I really hope you have improved as a writer since writing this because this story sucks the drama is so blatantly manipulated it's ridiculous. None of the rules of your Universe are followed. You wrote them and just like Stephanie Meyers you're broke them. if you can't write 4 people who have talented powers, then don't write for them at all. because this is pure trash. thank you and have a Happy New Year

sorry but this is where the story gets stupid. it makes no sense Jacob could get in that house absolutely no sense whatsoever. this is just a blatant manipulation of every known law of that Universe just to make this plot work. ridiculous.

Hi its the year 2020 and I'm reading these so I may be late, but who sings the tune of Barney's I love you you love me at emmett's vampire ed? Just me? Okay

I was really sad to read Demetri did not survive... Would it affect too much if you somehow brought him back?

Heidi, I get it, cause she was the fisher for feedings.

Afton and Santiago... they're not mentioned much... though the latter had a similar job description as Felix and similar strength. Afton was Chelsea's mate... though you kind of mixed some other mates/imprints already so... But what made you decide to off those characters?

And why Corin? She was the "happy fix" to keep the wives content with century upon century of "house arrest" Her gift is somewhat similar to Chelsea's. So why 'off' her?
I'm simply curious about those choices.

Why are you grouping quotes together in one paragraph? It get's confusing as to who's speaking.

I don't think this whole dream scene added anything to the story. It was embarrassing to read, Bella was embarrassing. I mean really, she dreams about a guy shes known all of one day? What a desperate little clinger. I am of the idea that humans can NOT feel the "mating bond". I don't think they would be capable of it. So for her to be basically acting just like Edward...seems unreasonable.

I really don't care for Alices involvement in Edwards love life. Shes always fucking meddling and really? Its none of her damn business. She just sucks the fun out of EVERYTHING. Its Edwards first date, let him fucking have it!

Its alittle hard to read Edward call bella a goddess. Cause really? Shes really not very pretty, built like a 12 year old boy, chin is too narrow, nose is too big, and shes so clumsy it's like shes retarded. And on top of all that she does that weird mouth breathing thing. Meh.

I find it odd that bella not only addressed her 4 word reply but also signed her name to it. Did she think that there was a chance that Edward may not know to whom it was addressed? As if he was not sitting right next her, having just asked a question, or perhaps when he read the note he may not know from whom it came? LOL.

WOW

I am reading your story! Love it just much this time as I did last time!

Thanks for sharing this story. I skimmed over this story years ago when it was a work in progress but only reviewed two chapters, planning to come back to it once completed. Time flies, but I’m glad it was still here to properly read and review.

The children and their powers were amazing and I enjoyed the early romance between their parents. It was also good to see Edward and Bella interacting as parents with them. Emmett was great comic relief when life became too intense.

Take care.

I agree, it’s good that Leah imprinted on Embry hereand not Jacob.

Well, Bella has been changed.