Very cute! You're right, Helga can be a little dense in her own way as well, when it comes to guys! Hahaha!

that was sooo freaking cute. helgas such a dummy. hahahah., i suspected both.

So let me get it straight, despite the fact that they've made love before and have been living together, he fiddles with his hand in his pocket, he looks at her anxiously, he's looking at houses, and he's telling himself and his dad about "doing it," she SERIOUSLY thinks he's going to break up with her, and on the anniversary of the day they got together?

Man, she CAN be so dense!

Yay, but I knew he was going to propose! That'll really knock her for a loop! And we know she'll accept; he caught her completely offguard, only suspecting the worst, not the best!

Man, Helga sure sounds as dense and clueless as Arnold can be when it comes to love!

i looves it!

ppoorr pooorr helga

*sigh*

what would she do without our beloved do-gooder by her side

In all of the fanfics where you mention cologne it always smells terrible, I take it you're not a fan.

I am the TippyToe Zombie

I like to limbo

Often I fall on people's heads

In most shows/books/movies the girls always think their boyfriends are going to break up with them when they are really going to propose. In "Legally Blonde" the reverse happened.

I'm very impressed with your impersonation of Helga...I can definity hear her saying all of this to the reader while still being herself. XD

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Okay, I know you don't know me but I'm going to say this as gently as possible from one follower of Christ to another, for we are to hold each other accountable, your story has explicit sexual detail in it that I know is not appropriate for a Christian, especially one so young as yourself. I briefly skimmed it after I read the first shocking statement and had to double check that I was actually reading your work since I did not expect that from you. I read your testimony on your profile and thought it was beautiful however, keep in mind our testimonies extend beyond the miracles God has done. Purity is one of the most important gifts we have as Christians, both physically and mentally, and God expects us to honor Him in everything we do, including writing. I’m not trying to be harsh but it must be brought to your attention that the language and descriptions you have used here are morally wrong and displeasing to God. Can you really say that what you have written here honors Him?

Do not conform any longer to the pattern of this world, but be transformed by the renewing of your mind. Roman 12:2

But among you there must not be even a hint of sexual immorality, or of any kind of impurity, or of greed, because these are improper for God's holy people. Ephesians 5:3

Another exllcent chapter here love Helga reaction when Arnold asks her to marry him

Hahaha... you do a pretty cool description of Helga's thoughts.

Keep the good writing.

Helga's funny! LOL!

Arnold would be an idiot to dispose of Helga!

I thought the last chapter one shot thingy was great, but Kiddo, you just surpassed yourself! Man that was some kind of better than good!

I know I sound like a broken record for your reviews, but I just want to express how much I enjoy your work!

*applauds*

You are one of the best writers in here! I cannot *wait* to see what you are kind enough to let us read next!

'Roar

I say it all the time, but I *LOVED* this, holy crap you're so good!

It's about time the shoe was on the other foot, and you really nailed it perfectly! Helga would be just as clueless as the love of her life, and it's priceless that you've written it in first person!

I would say I can't wait to read more, but I don't have to! Whoo Hoo!

'Roar

hahhahahaha this is so hilarious, hahhahaha maybe she also get naive when they were together hahhahahaha like he get more naugthy hahhahahah i love it ;D LWY