Reviews for The New Member of the Order
Ariastella chapter 17 . 8/6/2018
You know... I can't help but wonder... Has Danny, in the entire time that he's been at Hogwarts, ever just been floating around 1 of the common rooms & found a wand just left behind? And if he has, has he ever just, playfully, imitated a really common incantation like "lumos?" What would happen? I mean, Harry Potter lore says that if a Muggle tried to wave a real wand there'd be something like a kick-back, but what about in this situation? Like, would he turn out to just be a No-Mag or is he a Halfa whose also magic?
I mean, heck, he might've been a Wizard all along but because his family is so obnoxiously supernatural & the town he lives in is now Spooksville USA, maybe the entire town of Amity has just been... blacklisted by MACUSA from ever attending Illvermorny? So, now no one from Amity ever learns of magic, not even those with magic.
… I'm pretty sure that this was the plot of 1 of another great DPxHP Crossover actually...
Ariastella chapter 16 . 8/6/2018
Whelp... Danny just gave Sirius, like, the best Christmas present ever.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/8/2017
Danny's dialogue is slightly OoC.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/8/2017
And here I thought that Voldy would send a more manipulative person to persuade Danny to help them fight.

Literally, I swear the guy's just like, 'wanna come over and kill people with us? It's fun! And you don't get to say no so if you say so, we're kidnapping you.'
ani.writes chapter 30 . 5/19/2017
Awesome story
Nikki Pond chapter 29 . 3/21/2017
You know one of the surprising things you hinted in this fic is the startling romance between Danny and Hermione. I am convinced there is SOMETHING. At least on Hermione's side, because it seems Danny's oblivious and just confused with a lot of problems plus with his feelings for Sam.

The end just made me confirmed that there is someone staring under Danny's nose. He's kind of dense to notice. It's really convincing, his POV in that angle. Because I have read this 5x and it honestly hadn't occurred to me about Hermione and Danny pairing till I actually took notice of Hermione's reaction, and Danny's confusion of his feelings for Sam just made me realize where the story is going. I find that Danny and Hermione would be a one of a kind, a unique relationship, and I am convinced that you'll be able to slow-burn it realistically and I would definitely love to see that Danny would notice Hermione in a different light. Like really notice her.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
Slow down, you have a lot of mistakes and repeated words. Other than that, it's a good story
553Colinm chapter 30 . 6/28/2016
great story but you kept putting s instead. of mungos
Guest chapter 16 . 4/11/2016
Lol im cracking up
ElizabethBathog chapter 30 . 3/27/2016
This was awesome! I am going to read the sequel now! :D Thank you for writing this! :)
Azucon chapter 18 . 7/31/2015
Hermione saves the day!
Azucon chapter 16 . 7/31/2015
How dare you make Danny eat toast! *Flare and Jas holding me back when I try to jump through the computer to attack your face*
Demi: sorry about Candy, she gets mad when people make Danny eat toast. Danny actually said that he hates toast in the series.
Azucon chapter 14 . 7/31/2015
*burst out laughing at Danny when he yells at the sky*
Azucon chapter 8 . 7/31/2015
Danny obsession is protecting, of course he would keep an eye on everybody and not just Harry.
Azucon chapter 7 . 7/31/2015
Yeah they usually have some kidnapping or an "accident" happen before he gets there.
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