YUSSSSSSSS! I didn't realize how badly I needed to read that at 12:00 at night. Keep up the good work!

Wwooooooaaaah. 3

Your ending was okay.

That was hot! ;-)

the ending was hot! keep up the good work

May I just say, first and foremost. I love you. That was spectacularly written. Wonderful plot, character thoughts, dialogue and setting. And most of all, what hot lemon. I must admit, I was planning to read a quick one-shot before bed to pass some time, but I'm afraid I may be unable to sleep after that; you've gotten me rather riled up now... And the ending seemed perfect- it gave some closure, and made me smile. In fact all I was thinking of, before I sort of calmed down to write this, was what Vegeta said and how it sort of foreshadows their relationship further in the future...anyways, thank you for the amazing story!

AWESOME! Vegeta and Bulma would be proud.. SEXY VEGETA hehe

You've done a great job! :)

I love the way it's written and I love the whole idea of your story! Especially the way Vegeta and Bulma used to interact with each other... either verbally oder physically.

And I could well imagine that if the anime had shown us the way both got together it would be as you discribed it in your os :D

You realize both of the them and their characteristic features perfectly! :)

holy fuck that was hot

do another chapter please

One of my all time favorite lemons! I read it again and again!

that was hot

DAYUM! Just, DAYUM. I've LOOOVE stories like this between Vegeta and Bulma, where there's no real mush, just amazing "gonna-be-walking-funny-the-next-day" pleasure. LOVED IT

well, he was a real man!... very good work!

HawkAngel

Wow, very hot! Nicely written especially for a quick one shot.

Just the inspiration I need for my own story. ;)

O_O This was sooooo good! I love the way you portrayed Vegeta!