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This is a great concept and I love how traditional it is, but given the situation, I seem to feel like it all seems a bit too rushed and it is kind of turning me off to this story. I love your writing style and the fact that its not had any spelling or grammatical errors. That is one of my pet peeves and so far I haven't seen any.

I'm going to keep reading since my personal rule is ten chapters and then I can pass judgement but I figured I would comment anyway.

I found her in Inuyasha's extended family pictures on second page sixth picture to the right her name is Shi Kami pronounced She Kami she's long lost sister to Sesshomaro belladonna Inuyasha and Inuyasha's real twin please find her because her family and friends needs her so guys and ladies want to see her picture let me know,I will send the picture to you guys and ladies okay.

I found their little sister Inuyasha real twin find her please,her name is Shi-Kami pronounced she-Kami because she's in Inuyasha's extended family photos second page fourth picture to right

I found shi-Kami on Inuyasha extended family pictures she's on second page first row six picture down right next to her twin brother Inuyasha and sister-in-law Kogome find her please okay,her name is Shi-Kami pronounced She-Kami please find her she's long lost sister of Sesshomaro and Inuyasha she's Inuyasha's real twin sister okay

i love this story it's so beautiful and romantic

I really enjoyed the story and how the settings changed throughout the story

one thing to say venus and mars are roman not greek and she was married to the roman version of hepheastus

It took me forever to finished, but I loved it!

Loved the story I didn't want to review until I finished it but I hope you wright more inuyasha fan fics it was really good could hardly put it down

OMG I totally love this story besides the fact that is is almost like 900,000 words. You have such a way with words, and I don't regret staying up till four in the morning trying to finish the 20th chappie last year. Every time i re read this, the fun mystery and anticipation is still there. KEEP ON WRITING. SO GOOD

i seriously think that it will be inuyasha!

Hey i read da authors note and i feel bad for you personally i think that you should do wht you love and don't give a shit or f*ck about what your family thinks that you should do if they are not proud or extremely happy for you and what you love ignore them but what do i know I'm just a dumb twelve year old who doesn't know how to stand up for herself

Okay, this is like waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay late in this spectrum here but this is like the third time that I'm reading this thing! I think it's that good, lol.

IM NOT ON THE PAGE PLEASE PUT ME UP and if you need more help email me ! Great job and im starting to cry crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying im so happy 4 you email me