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This is gold. The dialogues are witty and funny, and even the 'telling' part of the story is amazing. I hope you continue

More please! This is brilliant!

This is a great story! You need to continue it some time!

i have no words… please god let there be more

please update soon. it's so fascinating story.

I just LOVE konahamaru's character! "Legasp!" lmao

Please finish this story it's great update soon!

Two years since the last update. -tears- but a ireally well put story that brings forth to tears out of the pure comedy please update

:( a year? No update? :','( I is so sad.
I is so bad grammar, too.
But seriously, not getting an annual update makes me disappointed.

I love this story! It's so cute and funny. Konohanaru's own mother ships KonoHanabi lol. I really hope you finish it.

Oh God! I love this story! You are so funny! I need to wipe this stupid grin off my face and hopefully get some shut eye before tomorrow. Thanks for writing this story. I hope you have the time to finish it. : )

Poor Konohamaru... You know what, scratch that, poor whoever marries him. I mean, he can't even do his own laundry? Seriously! Also, The fact that Hanabi is already calling Mrs. Sarutobi "Mom" is great foreshadowing.

Just a heads up, sorry if I'm cramping your style. The Sarutobi 'family' is in fact the Sarutobi clan, that means the high probability of a clan compound. Also of note is the fact that at the Third Hokage's funeral, Asuma was present but Konohamaru was standing with Iruka, not with any supposed parents. It could have been a ninja only funeral or some such however Konohamaru was still a civilian at the time. Then at Asuma's funeral Konohamaru was standing with Naruto. With this evidence it's looking likely that Konohamaru's parents are likely deceased, although I do understand that would ruin the point in this chapter. He still has the rest of his clan to look after him. Now if the Third Hokage was the clan head with Asuma's death, and the apparent lack of parents, Konohamaru would become the clan head although the Third being the clan head of the Sarutobis is speculation, fuelled by his general badassery.

I loved this! Hinata and Naruto's babies were so adorable. It's interesting how you made Hanabi, she was a piece of work! Nice to see her being soft around the babies. And I love the Konohamaru/Hanabi relationship so far. I also loved how you made Konohamaru have a crush on Hinata! I thought that was too cute! Hope to see more soon.