Aw this is cute. I love little Russia and fem China! Keep up the good work!

Oh, dear. Poor Russia... /sighsigh Amazing story, though. (:

Beautiful, but I think you should sincerely continue diffrent layers to the story. It doesn't feel finished yet. It's a begining I know, only it's such a good one why stop?

China and Russia are so cute together in this. :3

I really loved this. Stories with genderbending are rare, especially when it's serious (though I do love me some genderbending crack), and rarer when it's pulled off convincingly. China here is exactly how I'd imagine her to be-trying to fend off Winter with all she has, but she reluctantly knows her logic and reasoning won't get her in the clear automatically.

And the parts with China and Russia together were adorable, she's like his older sister! :) And how she's trying to protect him, but is still struggling to protect herself...

General Winter, you bastard DX

I added the story to the genderbending community~
NO!
IVAN, DON'T TRUST WINTER!
HE'LL EAT YOUR SOUL!
...Too late...
Anywhoo, keep up the awesome work!
Stay awesome!
(/ w)/

I guess this is how Russia came to be the icy nation he is~~
I like it~

That was amazingly good!

General Winter is so deadly, looking for a way to trap naive little Ivan like that...

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:D

Oh my gawd. I just know this is going to be so interesting~

Although I would love a male!Yao, the whole General Winter-love is too much to ignore.

I can't wait for this to continue 3

This is heartbreaking and very good. Thanks for posting it, I think(sniff, sniff, holding back tears).

Little Ivan is so cute~ Now I know how Ivan came to be such a horrible man... But I still want to know why he fogets all the happy and warm memories he shared with Yao in the past?

You have no idea how much I like General Winter for being creepy and yet wonderfully scheming.

Ah, China... You're a creep magnent. Poor thing.

Also... Russia! The cutness! It is too much!

This explains why gerneral winter helps Ivan XD

Ivan is being so cute and loving as a child, how does he turn out to be someone like he is now ;_;

I wonder whether Ivan can remember the days when he loved Yao so innocently...