great fic, i loved it and it fit with the episode perfectly

Hello! Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this fic. You did a fabulous job of examining Peter's thought processes toward the end of the episode. Angsty, but we all knew he was going to be upset.

Very nicely done!

A well-written look at Peter.

I hope that he and Walter reconcile, though.

GUH! Wonderful POV into Peter's head for all of this. I'm still reeling with all the possible outcomes of last week's episode.

And i Love that you posit that they actually did go for drinks, but Olivia acted weird and then made herself scarce for days after. Makes Walter's statements about being desperate to see her fit better. I wonder what Peter there when she disappeared after their not!date?

Oh well, leave that for another fictlet. This was LOVE!

Chichuri,

It still fascinates me how you can create such a concise, descriptive piece of fic in such few words. Brilliant!

This is so accurate, no matter how much it upsets me to say it!

Beautifully written! :)