I loved this story please finish.

are you going to finish this story or make a sequel ?

I love this story so much. I hope one day you will be able to finish it. Even though its not done I have still read it 7 times. I never tire of it. Love it that much.

I hope you finish this adventure one day! it's so exciting I'll keep waiting

Wow is the end or have you more to write..enjoyed this story

I just got to the end to be left with the biggest cliffhanger ever. Please finish this story, I love it so much. Thank you for sharing your talents.

come on please finis i am dying to know what happens next

I am a little confused as to why Kathy suddenly appeared. I thought maybe Olivia was dreaming the whole time but then it jumped back. I love the story concept but you could have left out Richard Parker and the whole kidnapping scene.

I'm having a hard time understanding where this story is going like seriously I'm confused one minute she's helping her partner keep his kids then they fall in love for real and get married had a baby then she gets kidnapped and stuff rescued then Kathy comes back into the picture then it jumps back to the, finding the guy like I'm lost

this is a wonderful story please put a wonderful ending on it

Oh god please go on! I really love it! I've wait so long for it!

Wtf wtf wtf wtf I thought kathy was DEAD!?

Not happy to me. Olivia literally sacrificed everything for him. And he still wats a divorce. This makes me cry.

I wouldn't want to get a divorce if a man got me all that mess

Oh shit