Very interesting. Pity it wasn't finished - I would have loved to have seen where you were going with it

It sends shivers up my spine wenever I read it. Its just so good.

StraightJacket xD

Damn this amazing story, now I'm hooked. Seriously, this is a brilliant story and one of the best Doctor Who stories I've read. The writing, the pacing, you've everything you've done perfectly. I can actually see this in episode form, be it Torchwood or DW. Please keep it up!

Good to see you back, hope to see you update again soon!

kinda cruel leaving it like that, update soon please!

Very enjoyable story. Keep writing!

loved it,cant wait for the next's chapter.

Molly Smith, eh? Snerk, snerk.

Wait. Was that her name before, or us she just pulling that out of her behind like her dear ol' da?

It would still be better if I knew more than the complete basics of Torchwood, but y'know. Also, Ianto is a beast.

You've got some awkwardly-worded stuff, but it's still good. Also, JACK.

...I just got all teary over End Of Time again. Drat.

Do continue, luv. Or at least text me back. Kbye.

~C

AAAAH I ACTUALLY KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON NOW!

(although I totally willfully ignored the author's note about post-Journey's end. Hehe. I know what happens through there, anyway. After that I haven't the faintest idea. Except that the Angels show up. And also Van Gogh. And Waters of Mars, of course.)

I think I might actually get into this after I watch Journey's End.

(So I finished my coffee, and now I'm totally spazzy, and if I don't focus too much the world starts to get all tilty...)

(It's kinda weird.)

But anyway. I kinda like this. And maybe now I'll actually be able to make a comment other than HAI THIS HAS JACK I LIKEE JACK.

(Although that most definitely remains true.)

i like it! it's written very well :) you gonna update anytime soon?

Wow, I'm liking it. I like the little details you are putiing in to make the story that little bit better, keep up the good work.

ZOMG IT'S JACK!

Teehee I liked him in that one episode you showed me.

HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYY!1

...I'm going to go finish the new Supercali chap because I'm REALLY INCREDIBLY CLOSE. So bye now.

Lovely chapter. i cant wait to see where this story is going. i love the way you portrayed Ianto. his thoughts were really in character. im really excited to see more of him. Also, captain Jack: super excited for his entrance, as well as the rest of the torchwood Team.

Psyched for the next chapter,

Kati

thank you! Ianto makes me so happy! i cant wait for the next chapter, this is so exciting!

much love

Blythe

I like the story and it is definitely getting interesting but hope one day that she finds her way back to her parents!