Hokuto makes such a beautiful Queen of Hearts. I could read about her ruling Wonderland forever. This is a fic i feel needs a lot of rereading to completely understand, so i’m sure i’ll get that wish.

This chapter is for me one of the most surreal. Nothing works the way you expect it to, and even when you think you know what something is, it isn't. Good job conveying that.

All that "Who is Kamui?" at the beginning of the chapter was really great. As you say, there're a lot of issues around the Kamui's identity.
I really love Fuuma's rewrite of 'The Walrus and the Carpenter.' He's got a warped mind, that one, and so do i.

This was a cool idea. X and Alice in Wonderland mesh very well. I like your choice of who's who.

I love the beautiful surrealness of this, and how Kamui wakes up knowing no more than when he fell asleep.

And, y'know, Hokuto, Seishiro and Subaru. XD Cause they just rock. "I may have YOU beheaded though!"

"aplausos"

una magnifica adaptacion de este libro que me gusta tanto, me encanto tu forma de explicar la crisis existencial de kamui. Bastante creativo y reflexivo

diez de diez y a favoritos!

Im sorry. I not speak english

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(google translation)

"cheers"

a wonderful adaptation of this book that I like so much, I love your way of explaining the existential crisis of Kamui. Very creative and thoughtful

ten out of ten and a favorite!

I've never read Alice in Wonderland but after reading your story, I think I should read it to understand all the references. Your notes after each chapter were a big help for me. I like the way you make the connections between Alice and X, especially about the role of Fuuma who is the Chesire cat and the baby at the same time. The end is really scheming _ I really have to read the book...

You're right about Fuuma and Kamui! Baka Kamui _ What you said gave me an idea for a fanfic about them. And don't worry about the explanation xD

About your story Snap, I've got all wrong omg! Maybe it's because I didn't watch the anime. I totally forgot Kanoe, poor woman. I don't think she was pulling the strings for the Dragon of Earth, at least not until Fuuma came and anyway they are free to do everything they want, Kanoe has no power to control them (Kusanagi rambling with Yuzuriha, Kakyo sleeping, Yuuto drinking tea xD, etc.)

And thank youuuu for the compliment about the last sentence of Deliquescence! It was the first thing I wrote in the story I wanted to write about a meeting of Fuuma and Seishiro before the "thing" on the bridge but I didn't because of my lack of ambition.

(I know this is an older story...but I happened to find it clicking through your profile :-D)

This is pure genius! I loved the way you kept the clever word play going throughout the whole thing (big fan of Alice, but the movies tend to drive me nuts because they leave a lot of this out!) and your poety was brilliant. I have to say my favorite part was Hinoto and Kanoe playing around the campfire, though. "Do you know how ineffectual you are?" made me laugh so hard.

Great fic!

Nice crossover, I just love how Kamui's Alice and is in a dress! So cute~ and Subaru's the rabbit, aw, he has bunny ears, and Hokuto's the queen! I knew she was gonna be the queen! This fic is intresting, I like how it crosses over to the cconcept in X with Kamui's wish and if Kamui is actually Kamui and Fuma is actually Fuma and all that confusing stuff.