Minor critique. Paragus wanted revenge on Vegeta. Assuming that the cross like scar on his left eye being that of the one paragus has. Unless this takes place after the Dbz Broly movie, (assuming that's canon in this fic). Disclaimer: Wrote before I have read past this point. Other wise fantastic chapter.

J'aime beaucoup sauf que ce n'est pas parce que videl est devenu Saiyan a 1/4 ou 1/2 qu'elle va automatiquement devenir plus fort que l'humain.
Les plus forts sont ceux de la série mais tout les autres Saiyan était fort mais faible , alors fort car leur puissance était entre 100 et 10000 a tout cassé, faible car même l'humain le plus faible en l'occurrence yamcha peut tous les battre.

Not bad story for a Saiyan Videl story

paragus

Pfft, I see that you're going to implement that strange 'Saiyan telepathy' shit. I hope you know that generic traits in a story are real turn-offs.

Why does Videl have to be a goddamn screeching banshee in every single DBZ fic? I mean, I guess it's accurate to the anime, but it'd be nice for her to have a unique personality.

Regardless, this seems to be an interesting fic. Wonder how the rest of Gohan's day will play out.

Why is gohans first day of school when he's 16.

Hey!

After all these years, I JUST noticed the promotional you gave me regarding my old story, "Will Gohan Survive." To have you do this means a lot to me since I strive to be as good as a writer as you. You always have amazing ideas that makes your stories so much fun to read. Again, thank you so much for this. You brightened my day in 2017 even though you did this years ago.

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Dum dum dum

This is Turles or Raditz isn't it?

J'aime.

Oh. nevermind

Sorry if I missed anything, but didn't all the Saiyans lose their tails?

Begin the Chibi Torture indeed

" Did he just call him father? But that guy also called this kid his son." *cough* Siblings *cough*