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derektomlinson chapter 1 . 12/15/2019 tifa hissing at her boyfriend and husband cloud see even at eleven years old you didn't understand the reason why a ten year old mountain guide bartender would kiss my cloud |
derek chapter 1 . 7/1/2019 tifa saying to cloud you are not going anywhere till you drain your seed into my pussy |
Derek chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 Tifa to cloud i am pregnant thud great thehero who saved Gaia twice has just fainted |
derek chapter 1 . 10/14/2018 tifa to cloud get your chocobo head butt back here and let me ride your penis so that we can have children |
Boohbear19 chapter 1 . 8/23/2013 Cute |
Erilin-chan chapter 1 . 8/23/2011 Lol, so much that can be said in 50 sentences! Really cute little stories! |
scienceguy chapter 1 . 2/16/2011 Excellent work, as always. Though they were all good, I smiled at #37. |
MsRainey chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 10, 32, and 50 were my favs! Absolutely lovely, this was. I love how your writing just flows so smoothly! I sound redundant, but it's the truth! Absolutely in love with this. Great job! Hope you are fairing well. Tori |
sakR9 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010 nice! My favourite were [16] Weakness, [24] Taste, and [38] Gift :) Thanks for writing this! |
Kohryu chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 nice |
mom calling chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 Wonderful, VNinja. FF7 is a powerful metaphor for me-and it must be for a lot of people judging by the number of writers and reviewers...sometimes I get a glimpse of youthfulness or creaky older age in-we are a varied bunch, to be sure. I love the characters as young adults in the game and up to CC-but even more I love imagining how they move beyond canon to become whatever the writers dream up for them. To become people attached by the strong cables of shared lives and committed couplings... In the briefest of ways, you move them through time and space...and set my heart free to go with them. Thanks for each of these gems. mc |
serenbach chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 I really enjoyed these, I think you managed to capture Cloud and Tifa's realtionship so well in each short sentences. My favourites were star and sky, but I loved them all, especailly references to their baby. Great job, as always! :) |
shinobinaraku chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 AWW! My favorites are robably 2, 39, and 40, but they're all so adorable! Have you played FF13 yet? Or whichever the newest one is...hehe. |
Marisa chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 I enjoyed reading all of them. Thanks for sharing. In all actuality, some of them have inspired stories. I'll have to write down my thoughts for a later date. |
babysweettart chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 I loved it it was amzingly excelent i loved this one and all of ur others this was my first time reading a 50 sentance story and i loved it keep up the greart work:) |