Reviews for Shinobi of Pandora |
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LordLucifer666 chapter 3 . 5/21 I wish this continued and had longer chapters |
Uzumaki spiral chapter 3 . 4/25 Guess those bills piled up so long that you forgot about us... |
Benjamin Trachy chapter 3 . 8/8/2019 could you please update soon i would really like to know what happens next |
bluelolipop4421 chapter 3 . 2/14/2019 This Story is awesome! There are many Fanfiction were Naruto is immortal, so I think this idea is great. There are great ideas. The discriptons are good and you can follow the Story line with out Problems. But There are things that are not so clear in my opinien, for exampel the time Change and the Story behind his immortality. How he feels and what Problems he had (ID, Birthcertificat ...) And then I wounder what happens to the Kyuubi wen he is in the Avater Body. I think you could pull so much more out of this Story. This is a tipp from a human, who loves Fanfictons and Crossovers. So please Update! PS: english is NOT my first language, so please dont mind the wrong words. |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/5/2018 Chapter please. Pretty please! |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2018 Why have you stopped writing please continue |
arya304 chapter 3 . 8/6/2018 your not updating this. its a shame too since this was such a kickass fic even with how little you had written |
BloodDragon24 chapter 3 . 5/9/2018 is this dead? if not please continue! i like this |
Xxy chapter 3 . 4/18/2018 Long three months! :D |
DNA2337 chapter 3 . 1/1/2018 Hope you get back to writing soon |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/27/2017 ... le 7 years later... |
creator676 chapter 3 . 6/20/2017 7 years later... Any time now O_O |
Illuzunist chapter 3 . 2/25/2017 Really interesting concept, if possible could you try to continue this story? If not,would you be open to allowing someone to adopt this story and maybe use your notes? |
NHarem Foreva chapter 3 . 2/23/2017 Next 3 months huh? |
hazelle-chan chapter 3 . 12/26/2016 HI please make more. I lobe it. |