Super story loved it and thought it was excellent now I’m off to read Easy Smiles, Hard Eyes.

Awesome story I liked it and I’m bummed this fantastic story came to an end.

Nice word flow. I like this a lot.

Intriguing. I wanna know I wanna know I wanna know! What in the world happened? What's Jim hiding? Good stuff. Thanks for the read.

hmmmmm... i think you should continue it. it kind of left an...unfinished taste in my mouth, kind of like it was a prologue seperated into two different chapters. maybe it could be about people finding out how he's hiding? i dont know. but yes, continue, definitely.

I liked it! A series would be nice especially if its as enjoyable to read as this one!

I think a series would be nice, You have definitely caught my attention with the previous chapters.

I like these. Tarsus!angst is fun, especially when EVERYONE gets in on it. D

Please continue

I like the way you write. It flows nicely along and it doesn't take to much effort to read.

I like the idea of a series, especially as it holds the potential of some h/c storylines, yes?

Please continue.

It's a really cool idea. I'd love to see what you come up with :)

Iluvwind

I liked them a lot, and I think it wouldbe great if you continued.

Please do! I think that new series would be really interesting!

Excellent idea! Yes, do write more - however you would like to write it. I want to know what he's hiding :)

Just wanted to say (despite thwarting me-I think this is the fourth time I've tried, unsuccessfully, to leave a comment) that I really enjoyed this, and am looking forward to the next part. I thought this was very plausible in terms of these characters, and I'm interested to see the resolution (if any).