Marvelous story! I like the storyline. Have you abandoned this story?

MORE!

Yay! Edward and Rose are in the story! It just got a whole lot more interesting. I liked this chapter alot, especially the old fashioned talk (i.e. full moon), that was great, you should add some more of that in! Anyway, I would love to read some more! Keep writing!

Not really clear on what you said at the end because of all the -'s but okay.

Anyway, there's not really much to say about this chapter seeing as it is just for informational causes. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I 'm reveiwing! So please update fast! I really liked this chapter. I think that is was just as good as the last one, if not better! I was wondering if Roaslie and Edward were going to be involved in this story somehow. I wouldn't mind it they weren't, but it would be cool if they were! Anyway, great job! Keep writing!

Love this story so far.

HOLY CRAP! YOUR ALLLLLLIIIIIIIVVVVVVVEEEE! (Imagine just how Mike dos it in Twilight,, but waaaaay cooler- imagine how Jasper would do it ;))

This is amazing! I can't wait for the next chappie,, and how have you been? :) I haven't spoken to you in Aggggggeeeeeeeeeeeesssssss,,

and lovin the disclaimer and how youv portrayed Jacob and i just plain love Jasper and Emmett

I think this is going to be a really good story! I loved the summary, and I loved the story even more! I like the fact that Bella is the best at archery! Please update soon, I really would like to read more. I've got no critisisim, keep writing! It's great so far!

A great story. Very well written.

Love it! Jacobs an ass :/ And Jasper *drool* ;) Is htere gonna be more Jasper soon? and is Bella gonnal fall for *shudder* Edward? ;) Love ya,

LPPB